Chapter 71 - The Little Things

Mar 23, 2009 12:37

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Yea and Update.... gerberb March 23 2009, 20:59:04 UTC
Really good. I loved the interaction of the 3. It sure wanted you to have Hermione talk things out with run as well. It was good to see the three being able to chat. A few questions, but they probably will be covered in the next chapters. Thanks.

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Re: Yea and Update.... pokecharm March 24 2009, 12:53:15 UTC
I love writing scenes for those three - it seems so natural, like they should be 'the trio,' and leave Ron out of it :p Thanks for commenting :)

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masterwoods March 24 2009, 01:45:38 UTC
Now if you can get them all back together.

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pokecharm March 24 2009, 12:53:30 UTC
we're getting there :) thanks for commenting :)

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msninacat March 24 2009, 10:19:19 UTC
Great chapter! Poor Ron, it's his turn isn't it. ;D

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pokecharm March 24 2009, 12:54:06 UTC
honestly, when I wrote this, I thought Ron would be too much of a detractor of Hermione's idea, so I wrote it without him. But he'll be around soon enough :) thanks for commenting :)

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professorchris March 25 2009, 15:39:41 UTC
Another great chapter, it is great to see them interacting well now. I just hope that they continue when Ginny gets back to school as that is when the pressure will be on them both.

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pokecharm March 25 2009, 16:23:10 UTC
the pressure will be there, but the uncertainty won't be - so there is that :)

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HAHAHAHA! fk101 March 28 2009, 19:49:13 UTC
Hermione looked at Ginny thoughtfully. ‘She hardly sleeps at school, so she must feel really comfortable to be here with you. The only time I’ve ever really seen her sleep fully is when she’s…’ Hermione laughed and continued, ‘When she’s in bed with me.’

Harry gave her an incredulous look. ‘You’re sleeping with my girlfriend?’

that line made me laugh soo hard =D
i cant wait for the next chapters :P
followed this from the start...even tho its my first time commenting =)

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Re: HAHAHAHA! pokecharm March 29 2009, 21:00:22 UTC
I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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