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Chapter 78 - Hogsmeade

May 07, 2009 10:24

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mac_beth13 May 7 2009, 16:48:22 UTC

Good chapter, really like how Harry and Ginny are getting along. There was one sentence I thought was perfect when Harry, Ginny and Hermione were together and they were talking about Ron. Harry said, "If I have to start explaining Ron's behaviour, we could be here for ages." Really like that line and it's canon-istic quality. I'm starting to wonder when and if all the research is going to yield some results and an attack by outside forces might happen. Kinda bummed Ginny fell asleep, can't wait for the next chapter. :)

pokecharm May 7 2009, 18:04:56 UTC

yeah, I didn't think I could amp the ending up of this chapter...I didn't want to get inappropriate ;) glad you liked it and I am trying very hard to stick to Canon as best I can!

Great Chapter. gerberb May 7 2009, 17:26:17 UTC

Really good dynamic. With just enough of a cliffy to make us want more... I have to admit this is really building up nicely.

Re: Great Chapter. pokecharm May 7 2009, 18:05:19 UTC

we're closing in on the end, so it has to build now ;) I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

Re: Great Chapter. gerberb May 7 2009, 19:40:34 UTC

Yes, With Hermione's slip to Draco, Draco can regain his status with the darks side/Evil ones(Tom's group).

Re: Great Chapter. pokecharm May 8 2009, 11:46:51 UTC

I had an interesting time exploring that relationship...I really get why people pair them together now...it almost seems obvious!

so far stonerkenobi7 May 8 2009, 00:57:50 UTC

This is the first fan fic for harry potter that I have read and I have to say, it is very cool. It reminds of the EU of star wars in tha it follows right along and seems like could fit in with all the other stories of HP. I wish I hadn't read it so fast, because now I don't want to have to wait for a new chapter to come out. Great work and keep posting as much as possible! :-)

Re: so far pokecharm May 8 2009, 11:47:46 UTC

if this is the first one you're missing out on a lot of amazing ones out there! I'm glad you've found this one enjoyable and we're not far from the end now!

chocoluvr May 9 2009, 18:07:40 UTC

Good chapter with Ginny getting to spend some time with Harry alone and that he's also worried about Hermione's new friendship with Draco.

pokecharm May 10 2009, 01:14:21 UTC

they needed some alone time :) thanks for commenting :)