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Chapter 83 - Reality

Jun 12, 2009 11:17

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Really good gerberb June 12 2009, 19:07:51 UTC

I enjoyed the chapter. Thanks,

Re: Really good pokecharm June 13 2009, 14:48:43 UTC

hmm, interesting comment - what didn't you like about it?

Re: Really good gerberb June 13 2009, 15:37:19 UTC

Am I that transparent? I found a lot of stuff missing... or should I say it felt like it was jumping... A little more detail on the Harry/Draco,.., I enjoyed the out come but was left wanting the details as how things came about. But it was a good chapter.

Re: Really good pokecharm June 13 2009, 15:56:40 UTC

yes, very. It was obvious you didn't like it at all. The details are in the following two chapters.

msninacat June 13 2009, 10:17:00 UTC

Wow! Can't wait for more!

pokecharm June 13 2009, 14:49:09 UTC

I'm glad it kept your attention - it was the big 'ending' sort of :)

Please update soon.. gerberb June 23 2009, 17:02:09 UTC

Hi I have been checking 2-3 time a day since last Wednesday hoping for an update..

I do have a hard time waiting for your posts. I enjoy your story and often read the whole thing from the beginning. It is a little hard to do it here so I use mugglenet and then continue here. Thanks again for a great story.

Re: Please update soon.. pokecharm June 24 2009, 11:46:48 UTC

to be fair, my Beta only got me the last two chapters a day ago. If I have time today, I'll try to drop it in - otherwise I'm tied up a lot tomorrow, but should have time on Friday :)

chocoluvr June 13 2009, 22:24:38 UTC

Good chapter with Gaunt saving Harry, Ginny and Hermione with Draco's help.

pokecharm June 13 2009, 23:12:57 UTC

thank you :)

very thrilling amys_creations June 15 2009, 18:57:50 UTC

While there are still holes in the plot, which I am hoping will be taken care of soon, it was overall a very good chapter and moved along quite well. Bellatrix is one very disturbed lady.

Can't wait to see how this is going to work itself out, you've definitely piqued my interest.

MNF

Re: very thrilling pokecharm June 15 2009, 23:18:14 UTC

there are a few left, but almost all will be answered in the next chapter or the one after that - but after that, that's it :)

thanks for commenting :)

masterwoods June 18 2009, 02:01:54 UTC

Enjoyed the chapter. I think Harry and the rest of the crew would be better prepared and stonger by this time period. I know its your story and hope Im not being to picky. Can't wait to read the rest of the story.

pokecharm June 18 2009, 11:51:25 UTC

you would think, but I think the elements of uncertainty do play a role in this. And besides, how boring would this story be if everything were easier? we're almost done :)