Oh my Lord. I have so much to say about this story and I don't want it to end up me just ranting about it. I don't want this comment to turn into some form of word vomit. Let me start by saying. This plot is amazing, unique, and inspiring. Your characters are so freaking real, believable, and human. From the first ever chapter (prologue) I was reading this and going "Holly crap this should be a book or a movie." It seems so much like a real autobiography that your readers (or at least I) end up completely forgetting Brendon Urie lead singer of Panic! completely connecting with Brendon Urie grade ‘A’ actor. You build such an amazing atmosphere with your word choice and the way the tenses change as the story goes from past to present and you do it so well that it isn't sloppy or overwhelming.
Speaking of sloppy and overwhelming. This comment is getting kinda long and I hope I didn't bore you. I just wanted to tell you how amazing this story is.
(Totally not a sloppy and overwhelming comment, totally flattering comment, *love you!*)
You know when you're clothes shopping, and you see a dress that you really, really like, you just have no idea how it'll look on? Writing this fic has really been like that for me. It was like I tried on this dress that suddenly became really natural for me to be wearing, and when I've had uncertanties, all these people have come over and said how good it looks.
You just came over and told me my dress looks fucking fabulous, and now I'm blushing and grinning like a school-girl. So first off, a huge, huge thank you!
I've had this concept roaming my braincells for a while, and I'm kinda glad I didn't just jump straight in...it's really given me the opportunity to think it all out. I am so happy that people seem to be enjoying it, and every comment I get, even if it's just a few words is unbelievably flattering, so yea, as I said, your comment left me blushing and giggling like mad
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Let me start by saying.
This plot is amazing, unique, and inspiring.
Your characters are so freaking real, believable, and human.
From the first ever chapter (prologue) I was reading this and going "Holly crap this should be a book or a movie." It seems so much like a real autobiography that your readers (or at least I) end up completely forgetting Brendon Urie lead singer of Panic! completely connecting with Brendon Urie grade ‘A’ actor.
You build such an amazing atmosphere with your word choice and the way the tenses change as the story goes from past to present and you do it so well that it isn't sloppy or overwhelming.
Speaking of sloppy and overwhelming. This comment is getting kinda long and I hope I didn't bore you. I just wanted to tell you how amazing this story is.
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You know when you're clothes shopping, and you see a dress that you really, really like, you just have no idea how it'll look on? Writing this fic has really been like that for me. It was like I tried on this dress that suddenly became really natural for me to be wearing, and when I've had uncertanties, all these people have come over and said how good it looks.
You just came over and told me my dress looks fucking fabulous, and now I'm blushing and grinning like a school-girl. So first off, a huge, huge thank you!
I've had this concept roaming my braincells for a while, and I'm kinda glad I didn't just jump straight in...it's really given me the opportunity to think it all out. I am so happy that people seem to be enjoying it, and every comment I get, even if it's just a few words is unbelievably flattering, so yea, as I said, your comment left me blushing and giggling like mad ( ... )
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