Fic: Grace - Chapter 5

[flash_indie]

Title: Grace - chapter 5
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: P!atd (Bden/Ryro)

Comments

[runxawayxfaster]

This story has an amazing atmosphere. It's real and everyone is flawed in the most endearing ways. Thank God someone actually writes stories like this!

I don’t think I really looked at him before now. Well I did, but I didn’t really see him. I saw skinniness and hair and spindly limbs. But suddenly there were these eyes that just seemed to appear out of nowhere, like he blinked and suddenly those old, dark things were gone and in their place were these big, bright almonds that weren’t so nervous or uncertain. These eyes were steady, and weren’t a thousand years older than they were supposed to be. They were young and beautiful and certain.

and uh, could that be any more lovely? <3

I can't wait to read more

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much!^^

I hate writing/reading flawless characters. I think they come off as way to surreal and just...unreadable. Again, thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. *hugs*

[ninatron]

Now he looks like an LA hobo who stole a too-big jacket. Splendid.

this made me lol. haha.

i love your writing. its so detailed and... pretty amazing yeah. the imagery is fantastic. and ryan... *looks up wow in thesaurus* uuh... hes just wow.

quality stuff here
♥

[flash_indie]

Eheh, thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying this. ^^

[old_plain_me]

Woah.
This is great. The style, the details...are amazing.
Im in love with every image that you are giving me with the story.
And Ryan's character? It's like so sad but at the same time he's hopeful...*sigh*
ILY for writing this.
Sorry for the grammars mistakes in this im learning the language.

[flash_indie]

*blush* Thank you! Eheh, I'm feeling the love today *heart flutters*

Really glad that people seem to be enjoying reading this as much as I am enjoying writing it. ^^

Love, Sophie.

PS. Could hardly notice the grammar mistakes - seriously. Some people I know are way worse and they've spoken this their entire lives.

[sexwarandrobots]

This story is amazing. Like, seriously. I love it. And Brendon HAS to be gay, damn it! xD

[flash_indie]

Brendon doesn't have to be gay...he just has to be Ryan-sexual.

Eheh, thank you for the loveliness.

[barbara_rox]

I just read all the chapters and this is amazing.

I like that you changed things up.

Alot of writers just follow what actually happened.

This is great and I am at lost for words you are just a great writer.

I can't wait for more.

[flash_indie]

Thank you, it's always nice to get new readers. ^^ *loves you*

I'm glad you're enjoying it!