Fic: Grace - Chapter 8

[flash_indie]

Title: Grace - Chapter Eight
Rating: M (for language)
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

Comments

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much! *hugs*

<3

[old_plain_me]

You already know. I LOVE THIS.
Im addicted; really. God! Every chapter is incredible.
And every emotion is so real. I love you.
Hope you're okay ^^
<3

Re: <3

[flash_indie]

Ah! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I really am an over-emotional, over-sentimental person, so that's probably shining through a little more than I would've wanted it too...

Glad you're enjoying this! And again, thank you!

[flash_indie]

Comments like this leave me wordless.

Also giggling like a lunatic.

Thank you. ^^

[sarahhwithanh]

Oh man, you're amazing. I was seriously having a slight nervous breakdown, shaking included, and reading this calmed me down completely.
I had a dream a few nights ago that you updated and I checked to see and you hadn't and I was like "damn dream land". So I feel that I'm slightly obsessed with this story.

[flash_indie]

Why were you having a nervous breakdown? Are you alright? *worriesworries*

I'm glad it calmed you down though, in honour of you feeling slightly less than ok, have a sneak peak at the next chapter!

On the topic of crushes...

"You will never, ever forget the sweaty palms or the pounding heart or the heat that somehow manages to find its way into every cavity of your body. Won’t forget the watery eyes or the siege of rampaging butterflies with their armoured wings and their mission to make you feel as ill as possible and as unbelievably alive as you’ll ever feel.

It will make you believe in Cinderella, and Beauty and the Beast and all the fairy-tales that end with those three little words that surpass every cliché. Those three little words that are the cause of many an eye roll, and a never ending supply of ‘yea, till the divorce. Fuck happily ever after.’

But what sucks is that as long as that infatuation lasts, you won’t be saying ‘Fuck it’, you’ll be saying ‘Fuck, I want that…want it with him, with herHope that makes you feel

[sarahhwithanh]

I have random breakdowns cause I get nervous about everything I do. I don't get stage fright but I freak out about everything else.

Oh man, I feel so freaking special and that snippet made me feel all warm and fuzzie inside because there is a certain somebody who makes me feel that way and that just reminded me of him.

I should probably stop dreaming about updates, I even had a dream that I updated... I should probably go write now.

[flash_indie]

Random breakdowns? Yuk. I suffer from anxiety attacks. I hyperventalate (sp?) and then my asthma starts kicking my ass and have had to go to hospital a couple of times because of it, so I get how crappy the shaking and stuff is. Sucks.

Teehee, glad you liked the snippet, I've actually, in between me replying with that and now, written heaps more on that and watched 'The Break Up' in which I cried like a loser and was sorely disappointed at the ending. *sigh*

[elenlor_edhelen]

This story is so ridiculously beautiful--Your talent stuns me.

I particularly liked this part:

The silence sets in as the breezy voice stops, and everything is suddenly heavy, air is thick and tired and the gravity is beating down on the space between my shoulder blades. Poundpoundpound. My head is aching and Ryan can’t even look at me. Won’t look.

This is all wrong, this isn’t what I came here for, and somewhere, some nagging little voice in the back of my head says, well, what did you come here for?

It's utterly gorgeous. I hope there's another chapter soon.

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much. I'm x100000 glad you're enjoying!

Next chapter isn't far away, in fact, I've almost finished the next two chapters *le gasp!*