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Fic: Grace - Chapter 9

Jan 08, 2007 11:19

Title: Grace - Chapter 9
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

( But what sucks is that as long as that infatuation lasts, you won’t be saying ‘Fuck it’, you’ll be saying ‘Fuck, I want that…want it with him, with her.’ )

the country inside my head, grace, panic at the disco, bandom

Comments 45

ohemgeitsemuhle January 8 2007, 03:47:02 UTC

ahhhh! this was posted a lot quicker then i thought it would be. that alone made me love this chapter already, along with the fact that this chapter is incredibly amazing. i love how you explain about first loves & first crushes. and then the way you sorta-kinda hint at future events makes this 100 times awesomer. (is that a word? rofl)

i can't wait for the next chapter. =D

flash_indie January 8 2007, 06:26:23 UTC

'Amesomer' is the new hot. Next time Paris Hilton sees something she likes, she's totally gonna be "OMG, that's like, so totally awesomer."

Be afraid, be very afraid. ^^

Thank you so much, I'm attempting to get the chapters posted faster at the moment, and I'm kinda on a roll (already halfway through the next chapter!).

beccaforever January 8 2007, 04:43:09 UTC

Have a keyboard mash of love: KJLGHDSTYILKNMBVCXZ.

I pretty much love you. I just...screamed when I saw this chapter. I feel so lame. But, um, wow. I wish I was as good as you. Eheh. I love this story so much. I have nothing useful to say. I can't wait for the next chapter.

♥ ♥ ♥

flash_indie January 8 2007, 06:27:46 UTC

*squee* I think this is my first keyboard mash. *blushblushblush*

Eheh, this comment totally had me grinning. Thank you so much. *hugs*

beccaforever January 8 2007, 12:12:51 UTC

I totally stole your keyboard mash virginity. *feels proud*

Yay for grinning. You are most most welcome. *hugs back*

flash_indie January 9 2007, 00:14:25 UTC

You better have used a keyboard mash condom! *shakes fist*

Eheh, thank you for being so lovely. ^^

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amplifiedstatic January 8 2007, 05:32:38 UTC

Absolutely amazing. I had to catch up a bit, to be honest. But your characterisation, the conversations, the actions, everything, they just come so naturally, so realistic in the way that in our every day life we barely have the time to think once let alone twice about what we're about to say or do, and you write that out so beautifully. In our daily life, we're rarely able to react the way we want to, cry when we want to, smile when we want to, and again, you bring that in with each and every one of your characters. You have a very unique style of writing, and it's always refreshing to read this story. Amazing work! ♥

flash_indie January 8 2007, 08:45:25 UTC

Well ya'll sure now how to make a girl feel good, huh? Eheh, lovely, lovely comment! *is totally flattered*

I really did want to capture the fact that, in reality, what we say and what we think are hardly one and the same. It makes me ecstatic beyond belief that you've picked up on this. It was actually one of the thoughts that sort of started this whole thing.

Just, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. Much love!

sarahhwithanh January 8 2007, 05:36:35 UTC

I'm not crying.... Well I'm about to... Okay so Jon's little story made me sad. Who'd a thunk it, I have a heart. haha. Wow this story is so amazing that I'm not focused on the fact that they just had their first kiss together. Great chapter as always. Loved every little bit of it.

flash_indie January 8 2007, 08:46:32 UTC

Ah, the one that got away, huh?

Once again, thank you so much!

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flash_indie January 8 2007, 09:02:40 UTC

Guh. Just...guh. Thank you xinfinity, seriously. This comment blows my mind. Far out.

Okay, lets try coherent thought.

Alrighty, yep, human behaviour has always been something that has utterly fascinated me. Seriously, I do a lot of study into people with mental and physical disabilities, people coping with grief, cultural influences, etc. etc. (I do this for fun. Is this normal 16-year-old behaviour? I do this and have a social life *gasp*) I'm a student of history and society so, yeah, I love looking at the developments of viewpoints and standpoints ( ... )