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Fic: Grace - Chapter 11

Feb 04, 2007 10:49

Title: Grace - Chapter 11
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

( “You don’t though,” Ryan says, and he’s smiling a little, that smile that makes me feel like I’m the battery in the circuit, that he’s the light bulb. “Just breathe really heavy.” )

the country inside my head, grace, panic at the disco, bandom

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decoratedxerx February 4 2007, 01:16:06 UTC

Oh my God.
That was beautiful. I loved the metaphor between Ryan being a porcelain doll, and Brendon being the one to "fall off the shelf". That was really amazing. :P

flash_indie February 4 2007, 09:09:42 UTC

Aha, thank you so much! ^^ Glad you enjoyed.

rock_my_town February 4 2007, 01:16:26 UTC

Oh. My. God. That was so amazing. I really love the imagery of Ryan and the pillow, and adore when Loretta said, "he's a keeper." But, wow, that last bit was so intense. You keep me hooked and wanting more! Ah I hope i get to read more soon!

flash_indie February 4 2007, 09:10:44 UTC

*blushblush* Thank you so much.

(I love your icon. Ryan looks unbelievably hot in the RS shoot.)

dorkle_07 February 4 2007, 01:27:59 UTC

ooh ooh ooh! It gets even better!

I love love love your description of Ryan when he gets out of bed and Brendon sees him naked for the first time. It's so beautiful.

I love love love your writing style. This story is also pretty damn amazing.

flash_indie February 4 2007, 09:11:35 UTC

I love love love your comments. ^^

Thank you so much, next chapter should be a shorter wait hopefully.

lotrnhp4eva February 4 2007, 01:42:51 UTC

Wow... I really don't know what to say to this. Your writing never ceases to amaze me and it's just perfect... My heart always flutters when I see you've updated :) You're probably one of the best writers around and I'm just in awe of you and this story. Really, your chapters are always so fucking perfect and just... gah... Y'know, if I had YOUR way with words, this would be a much less shitty comment than it is now :(

flash_indie February 4 2007, 09:12:34 UTC

Guh, comments like this pwn my soul. Seriously. Thank you so much, (lovelylovelylovely) ^^

lushlips_x February 4 2007, 01:45:28 UTC

Oh that last line. Shivers down my spine. Fuck, that was amazing! I was so hoping you'd update this soon =]

flash_indie February 4 2007, 09:13:42 UTC

Eheh, thank you! I am so sorry about the wait, next chapter should be a lot quicker hopefully. ^^