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Fic: Grace - Chapter 13

Mar 25, 2007 11:21

Title: Grace - Chapter 13 (part 2/2)
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

( She’s wearing her heart on the bangles around her wrist; she doesn’t notice it dripping blood all over the floor, all over her bare thighs. )

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Comments 59

woodenduck March 25 2007, 02:56:33 UTC

Oh, you sure know how to pick your endings! Excellent, as always.

Sorry, I'm terrible at commenting on chapters. Expect something more on the final part!

flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:38:46 UTC

Thank you so much! *hugs*

(You need to write something now, so I can go and squee. *nodnodnod*)

rock_my_town March 25 2007, 03:03:04 UTC

omg....I am absolutley dying along with Brendon here. That last line is making me weep and GOD this chapter was amazing all over. I love the whole 3 species thing and Brendon being oblivious to how he really feels about Ryan and just...everything about this is leaving me in peices.

thank you thank you for updating with such an amazing chapter!

flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:42:15 UTC

Thankyouthankyouthankyou.

And yeah, Brendon is oblivious. Oblivious x 100,0000,0000,0000. Yesyesyes. ^^

Glad you're enjoying it!

crab_apple_kid March 25 2007, 03:04:28 UTC

you are a fucking genious. this is certainly one of the best stories i've read in a while

flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:43:50 UTC

Thank you so much. *hugs*

asdelacroix March 25 2007, 03:15:08 UTC

My little heart jumped when seeing this update, especially since I had read the whole story two days ago.
My little heart died when reading the last paragraph and my lungs gave in as well. I am waiting for the crows...

I am kind of sad.
Scratch that, everytime I read the line -like I can't believe it and need confirmation-I AM sad. Period.

I get too much into the stories I read...(well, as long as it's well written.)

flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:46:01 UTC

I'm sorry I made you sad. *hands you a tissue box* But with guys, they need a good kick up the arse to get things moving, or, if Spencer has anything to do with it, a good old punch in the face.

Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it. ^^

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flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:48:21 UTC

asfnrengdal.

I'm sorry I make you incoherent. *hands you a brand new voice box, a brand new vocabulary*. Thank you so, so much, and I really hope you feel better.

(Thank you for reading and commenting, especially when you're so sick)