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Fic: Grace excerpt

Mar 28, 2007 08:06

Title: Grace - deleted scene!
Rating: PG
Fandom: P!atd (Grace-verse, I guess)
A/N: So the thing is, I finished exams yesterday. This happened, and then I figured I should probably buckle down and finish those requests that people made 50 years ago. So
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grace

Comments 16

amplifiedstatic March 31 2007, 09:13:24 UTC

Fucking wow. Okay, I am stalking. Sue me. Since when was a need for good writing a sin, anyways?

This is just fucking brilliant. A piece you need to hold onto. If you ever want to get into writing as a profession, even on the side, this is one piece you're going to want to show off.

First off, Loretta is of course, one of my favourite characters. But when this started, I didn't know where it was going. I had no idea why Brendon was telling us this, and for a moment I feared the cliche breakdown or whatnot. But it's definitely not what I got. It was the perfect build-up to the perfect conclusion. And the last line, it hit me so hard it still stings.

Years later, a millennia later, I’ll tell her that it’s okay. She’s earned the right to be a motherfucking cynic.

Those are probably two of the best lines I've ever read.

Absolutely incredible. Be proud! ♥

flash_indie April 1 2007, 04:32:45 UTC

I like stalkers, so hey, no worries. ^^

I'm pretty sure I said somewhere else, but Loretta has become a rather amazing character to explore. I have a thing for writing about strong women, a lot of my original stuff that sits on my computer at home, it's full of stuff like this.

Thank you so, so much. *hugs* I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

bdavis90 March 31 2007, 09:33:14 UTC

you got me crying. I LOVE it when fics does that.
I needed this amazing little thing, thank you ♥

flash_indie April 1 2007, 04:29:42 UTC

Thank you and your welcome, I guess. ^^

I'm glad you enjoyed, and I'm glad that I could give it to you when you needed it. *hugs*

anonymous July 17 2007, 02:06:49 UTC

I read all of Grace last night. It took me from 10 PM to 5 AM. I dont know why it took so long but it was so worth it. And I just read this. The whole thing was just too amazing for words. Anyway, I love how Loretta was kind of a mother figure for Brendon. Maybe I'm the only one who thought that. I dont know. Towards the end of Grace I kept thinking about how motherly Loretta was toward Brendon and this kind of did the same thing.

I want to read other things you've writen because you're just amazing at this. It motivates me actually. But at the same time it intimidates me because I'll never be that good. But anyway, yeah I'll stop rambling now.