Fic: Grace - Chapter 14 - Part 2

[flash_indie]

Title: Grace - Chapter 14 - Part 2
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

Comments

[lushlips_x]

Oh wow. Oh wow.
I hate the fact that I never seem to be able to leave a decent comment. Its just that, this is so good, that a simple 'yay awesome story' doesn't seem fitting, yet my English vocabulaire isn't really spectaculair so, I just don't know what to tell you.

Yay, awesome story?

Haha, Im just kinda in love with your story. That's all. =]

[flash_indie]

You always leave decent comments, love. ^^

Thank you so, so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[mandy_croyance]

Dearest, I love you. I love you so much.

I love you and this story, and I can see it, can feel it ending now and as much as it breaks my heart (cleaves it clear in two, right down the center, perfectly open), I'm anxious to get there, finally: back to the beginning.

This chapter...
“Because you don’t give a shit about me,” he says, and he stares at me with big, sad eyes. “You don’t give a shit about Catherine or anyone other than yourself. You’re selfish beyond reason, and some 13-year-old girls might think it’s cute, but I sure as fuck don’t."

Oh, Ryan. Oh, Ryan, yes. Yes, Yes. Brendon, yes.

[mandy_croyance]

Are you online?

[flash_indie]

I love you right on back! (but you know that, huh?) ^^

You can feel it winding down? I'm glad I guess, but I do have one more twist left in me, one or two and that second one, I should probably bin it right now, coz I don't think this fic can handle anymore 80 degree turns.

Thank you so much.

[mandy_croyance]

Haha. Of course you do. Of course.

Go on, then. Surprise me.

[poisonarrows]

I'm being one hundred percent sincere when I say that this is probably one of my top five favourite pieces of writing ever, published novels included. Your characters are so vivid and three-dimensional and real that it's hard to remember that this is fiction. Your metaphors are simply beautiful and amazingly original.

I get ridiculously excited whenever this is updated, but I have so much trouble leaving feedback because I'm speechless ninety-nine percent of the time. Basically, my overall comment so far is that this is a brilliant story and I'm undeniably jealous of your talent.

[flash_indie]

Oh...wow.

Wow, really, thank you so, so, so much. *blushblushblush*

[rock_my_town]

Oh god I'm so happy you updated. I'm so happy Brendon and Ryan talked and I'm so happy that Brendon is going to read the book...finally.

I loved this..I just really fucking love this story!

[flash_indie]

Ahah, thank you! ^^ Glad you're enjoying it!

[asdelacroix]

I think I had realised when watching Spiderman and crying everytime he would save someone that I was an oversensitive person.
But when I cry here I just feel normal. A little dramatic maybe.
Or maybe not since everything you're picturing here is so fucking real that when we see the 'leave a comment' line we're wondering what the fuck is happening.

I don't really wonder how this will end, because I already know for the biggest part. The end bringing us back to the begining.
Maybe I will commit suicide at the end of this >>.

I cry a lot, but I love it. I love it so I cry, eh.

[flash_indie]

Spiderman? Really? Heheh ^^.

I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm glad that a part of you is able to connect with it so much.

The ending isn't too far away now. Four more parts or something? We're getting there, starting to wind down a little. Please don't commit suicide at the end! I'll write other things, I'll write new things!

(But thank you, none the less.^^)