I'm not totally sure what people are expecting for this, but I hope you all enjoy it. I've tried not to introduce anything new, rather have opted to make it more of a reflection piece in the same vein that I wrote a lot of the opening scenes of chapters within 'Grace
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Oh man I've got tears in my eyes. *is lame*
Amazing job as always. ♥
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You need to be a published author. Right fucking now. I swear, dudette, I swear you'll go places with that talent.
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It's not so much the story that's the best bit, although that itself is amazing, but the style you use, and the metaphors that no one would thing of in a million years, but you did.
Nudity, Catherine told me once, when she was high and trashed off her face, when her make-up smeared to make her look like a work of post-modern fucking art, is a state of mind.
Nudity is a state of mind. That was a brilliant line. It linked in perfectly with the thing's i was doing last year in school, how different people feel comfortable wearing different amounts, although this is of course talking figuratively.
Anyway, i'm about to go and read all of your other work, so expect to see lots of comments from me...
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I just sat here and read the whole thing at once. I seriously think it's one of the best stories I've read ever. It probably is the best story I've read. So, thanks. I really loved it.
also, hi! i have never commented your stories before! so, hello (:
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This was beautiful. I will admit, I was skeptical. I had the tab opened, read the first chapter, and closed it. But I picked it back up. And I read it.
And I'm so glad I did.
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