Comments | flashfly: Halloween came early

flashfly

Halloween came early

Oct 03, 2007 04:48

I wrote two B&J vampire drabbles for the qaf drabbles community.

No idea how this happened, but here they are. Please be warned, there's blood and biting.

( Night Games )

my qaf drabbles

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Vampire Brian and Justin firehead30 October 3 2007, 21:50:09 UTC

SHIT SHIT SHIT

SO wonderful.

Poor Teddy, I bet he got many an eyeful at Kinnetik, so it would only stand to reason he would still be getting an eyeful as the loyal servant.

BUT the two of the pouncing on each other ARRGG fantastic.

Re: Vampire Brian and Justin firehead30 October 3 2007, 22:00:08 UTC

Jude, are you watching Dexter on Showtime? I just saw the first episode yesterday evening.

Re: Vampire Brian and Justin flashfly October 4 2007, 02:50:06 UTC

Yes I am! And ooh, I was dying when they showed the wide shot of the underwater continental shelf. It was such a perfect visual. All those black bags littering the ocean floor.

I cannot wait for him and Doakes to really get into it. Do you think Dexter will kill him? Don't spoil me if you know something. I'm just speculating.

Also, I'm glad Rita's husband's gone. But she's still suspicious.

Dexter's sister. I loved it when she snapped!

I can't remember. Did he end up killing someone or not? I know the beefcake got away. Jesus, my brain is fried.

I just thought of something. He's impotent because he can't kill. Soft dick, soft cleaver. His tool is broken.

I think the new female boss is hot.

Re: Vampire Brian and Justin flashfly October 4 2007, 02:42:52 UTC

*pounces and play bites you!* I've missed you! Omg, I want to write more B&J vampire fics. Quick! Throw garlic at me! Put a stake up my ass! Something! Naw, I'm really happy with the way these turned out. I woke up yesterday morning and had this burning desire to write vampire fic. Who knows where this shit comes from. :) But if I roused such a passionate response from you, my lovely white-throated darling, I may just write some more. ♥

peripety October 3 2007, 23:08:19 UTC

Oh, wow, vampire Justin and Brian are sexy as all get-out! *fans self* The hunger you portray in the first is amazingly potent, especially as you only had 100 words to fan those flames. Great stuff!

And dear Teddy, heeee!

flashfly October 4 2007, 03:05:04 UTC

The hunger you portray in the first is amazingly potent, especially as you only had 100 words to fan those flames. Great stuff!

I spent hours and hours on that first drabble, trying to get as much passion and lust as possible into the 100 words. I wanted to add so much about how Justin was acting as he waited, how he almost ripped the prey out of Brian's arms, etc. But, 100 words! So, it's really good to hear you say it was potent. Thank you!

Teddy. He's constantly overwhelmed in that big ole villa. :D

D rabbles fansee October 4 2007, 02:22:54 UTC

I usually dislike vampire!fics. I just realized that's because this I never read hot man-on-man vampire!fic before. FanSee

Re: D rabbles flashfly October 4 2007, 03:09:51 UTC

I've always thought vampires were incredibly sexy. And you know I think B&J are smoking! Thus a B&J vampire fic was born. :) I think I have one more in me - a PG Ted/Justin. I can't resist near-swooning Ted. Thank you, FanSee.

tigbit October 4 2007, 20:08:37 UTC

I remember many moons ago we talked about our mutual love for vampire!fic. And after reading these...yep. It's still there. ;)

Excellent. I love how your drabbles are stories - full and complete, even though they're 100 words.

My favorite line:

"...So you've stammered in the past."

So Brian. And so Ted.

Gold stars.

flashfly October 5 2007, 05:27:57 UTC

We did talk about it, didn't we? :) You should do a vampire drabble for Halloween. You have days and days to work on it. Come on!

I haven't gotten gold stars since first grade! *licks and slaps them on my forehead* Merci, cherie. ♥

doppelganger44 October 11 2007, 05:28:39 UTC

OHHHHHH these are the drabbles I saved in my memories. Very cool. I love this!
I said it over at QAF DRABBLES and I will say it again. OUT LOUD.

"“Manners,” Brian growls, yanking Justin’s head back, then lunging forward to bite just as hard. Ecstatic, Justin pushes closer, cock rock-hard, moaning, rutting, sucking, until the first of his orgasms takes him.
"

VISUAL, SOMEONE MAKE ME A VISUAL!!!!!!!!
Okay, I'm done.
LOVED THIS!

flashfly October 13 2007, 03:30:41 UTC

I'd make you a never ending loop in color film if I could! Thank you!

doppelganger44 October 13 2007, 17:01:34 UTC

Wouldn't that be amazing! My pleasure.
Now, I would like to know...IS THERE A SEQUEL????

flashfly October 13 2007, 22:38:35 UTC

Well, I did sign up for the Halloween challenge . . .

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