fic: Barefoot

[flawsrevenge]

So!  I am successfully relocated but still have no permanent internet connection or really permanent anything.  The life of a nomad, how sweet it is...  I have seen and enjoyed the new episodes of Prison Break, and I intend to try my best to keep caught up on all the fannish goodness.  Or to get caught up.  One of those.  Too many shows, too little

Comments

[citosol]

I love Ted and Charlie in their house...

and:
“Well, ah, in case after your moment you’re hungry, I’ll put yours in the fridge.”
This is our Ted!!

^__^

[flawsrevenge]

Oh Ted, so silly, so great. I think when I wrote this I really just wanted a smoothie, myself...

Thanks!

[oxoniensis]

I loved this little moment in time, Charlie connecting. And the conversations with Ted were just so spot on in character! So good!

[flawsrevenge]

Thank you! I'm pleased that you found Ted in character!

[drathis]

That was oddly hilarious. Brilliant juxtapose between the then of prison, the now of his meditation, and... Ted. Who is adding mango to the smoothies.

[flawsrevenge]

Thank you! I think a mango smoothie would be excellent about now...Ted agrees. :-)

[tavella]

You probably won't see this -- but I love this piece. The way he's trying to center himself in the now, in the place where he is, and the way the physical reminders of what has happened to him keep pulling him out of it.