blame dull fate

[fledgist]

where no one sits there’s no reason to wait

yet there are many who with sharp regard

look in the distance with eyes that are hard

to see what they can measure of the gait

or bearing of the folk whose heavy freight

will end like all things in the somber yard

together with the honest and disbarred

and all that we can do is blame dull fate

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Comments

[rymrytr]

Very good meter and succinct thought patterns! The message comes across well!

[fledgist]

Thank you.