the last short trip

[fledgist]

 so much is lost inside the space of dark
where what we see and hear is felt so hard

that when we tear or find the door is barred

to every vision and without a mark

we turn to go we hasten to embark

on one more journey while you stand on guard

with eyes close watching on the final yard

as all our choices now have come down stark

no names

Comments

[elisem]

"no names are mentioned in the frozen place" is going to haunt me.

[fledgist]

Thanks, I think!