A little dribbly drabble

Dec 29, 2008 08:35

A/N-I wrote this during the advent challenge and never posted it.  It was inspired by the challenge word "punch" and it's not really finished but I guess it's finished enough to stand as it is and I thought I'd go ahead and post it.  I'm still working on the next update for "A Beautiful Noise" but I haven't had a lot of spare time with the holidays ( Read more... )

cohens plus one, the oc, one-shot, punch

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60schic December 29 2008, 15:23:38 UTC
*sighs* So bittersweet. And you proved what I know: children, of all ages, unburden themselves at bedtime. Some just need alcohol to release the feelings.

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kazfloyd December 29 2008, 15:33:28 UTC
Very sweet and sad! I really enjoyed the flashback to casino night and how Ryan took care of Dawn afterwards. Something that I am sure happened we just didn't see in canon.

Great job!

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fifimom December 29 2008, 21:36:07 UTC
"She breathes in deeply and closes her eyes. "god, what was I thinking, inviting Dawn to Casino night?"
"You were buying us more time with Ryan", Sandy replies. "You were worried. We all were after what we'd heard at dinner that night. You were just as reluctant to let him go with her as Seth and I were."

I've always wanted to hear/read these lines.
This is lovely, thanks.

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smc36 December 30 2008, 15:26:47 UTC
oh so sweet and sad and wonderful.

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beachtree December 31 2008, 07:13:06 UTC
Many have beat me to the punch (I had to work that in, right?), but this drabble is a lovely little gem ( ... )

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