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Long Way From Home, Chapter Thirty Three

Mar 20, 2009 15:42

Title: Long Way From Home
Author: me, un-beta'd
Warnings: Language, Violence
Summary: Ryan's dad shows up unexpectedly and throws the Cohens +1 into turmoil
Cross posted: fanfiction.net

( Chapter Thirty Three )

long way from home

Comments 12

katwoman76 March 20 2009, 21:07:37 UTC

What a wonderful surprise on this friday night to see this story back.
Love the update.

fleetingfancy March 23 2009, 15:06:59 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't even sure if I was going to attempt an actual session between Ryan and Dr. Morgan, as I have no idea how any of that would be handled. lol. But, what the hell. I sat down and went for it.

beachtree March 21 2009, 05:15:16 UTC

Good to see you writing. I know I need a refresher course, so I'll back up a little to rattle the brain tomorrow and revisit.

Thanks...

fleetingfancy March 23 2009, 15:08:18 UTC

I could have used a refresher course myself but I *think* I remembered what the hell was going on in this story when I wrote this update. lol.

beachtree March 23 2009, 21:33:13 UTC

I haven't gotten to the current chapter or comment yet, but I DID shift into reverse and read back two chapters. That's... something, right?

Hopefully, there will be some time when I drag in the door tonight. We shall see! I'll give you the benefit of the doubt for mad memory skillz.

makingway415 March 21 2009, 05:54:29 UTC

fleetingfancy March 23 2009, 15:08:49 UTC

alluxera March 21 2009, 12:57:28 UTC

I like Caleb here, it is a special relationship between grandkids and grandparents and Ryan needs a grandfather, he would be more relaxed with Caleb as with the Cohens.
Thank you for the update.

fleetingfancy March 23 2009, 15:10:19 UTC

Yeah, I'm kind of all about a nice Ryan/Caleb relationship right now. Which is making it hard for me to get back into "Deception", where Caleb is a prick. lol.

Glad you enjoyed the update:)Thanks for commenting.

beachtree April 20 2009, 04:42:47 UTC

Okay, I'm finally back- for real. Like you... craaaaazy- and a dead 'puter. R.I.P ( ... )

fleetingfancy April 20 2009, 13:43:19 UTC

Ok, lj ate my reply so I'll try again.

Thanks for the thoughtful review, as always. Maybe this will be the kick in the ass I need to get some updates done. lol. I have some of each story done but none are anywhere near ready for update. It's been a while so I really should buckle down. lol.

I got into something that caused an allergic reaction on my right hand and so typing in long stretches has been a bit difficult. I keep nearly getting it cleared up but then, needing the use of my hand, I irritate it again and it just won't heal up properly.

I tell ya, if it's not one thing it's another.

At any rate, I hope to get back to it soon.

beachtree April 20 2009, 15:38:31 UTC

I know it's frustrating when LJ just randomly- and stubbornly- decides to snack. That seems to happen to me far too often. I was beginning to take it personally. Welcome to the club! I almost always save to notepad in my paranoia now. Last night? Not possible. Since my 'puter had gone into a spiral and then died- DNR (mother board and all)- I was using a friend's unfamiliar iBook. The keyboard was unfamiliar and notebook? Um... And it's impossible to remember a comment, and then you expect it to be eaten again ( ... )