Wow, this story is gripping. I love the unfolding character development, and the world-building is exquisite. I felt like I could see every spire and statue and all the bustling humanity of the alien capital. You really make us feel the loss of this place.
Katie is a terrific character. I was constantly trying to decide whether she was evil or not. At one point it was like, "Well, she has a good sense of humor, so she can't be evil...right?"
Huge thanks to you again for the banner! I find it very inspiring for when I sit down ready to write another chapter! <3333 And I am thrilled you are still enjoying the fic!
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I love how well you play with that idea and how the reader is just as confused as Jared.
Now I must go daydream about Jared's legs in that skirt!
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Thank you so very very much for reading, sweetie! I really appreciate it! ♥
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I have no doubt Katie was right and that sparkly!Jared was hot. Hehe.
Updates of this awesome verse can't come fast enough. So darn good! :-)
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