Oh, I wonder how this is going to go. Hiroki needs to remember that he's much better off and much happier with Nowaki than he would ever have been with Usagi-san.
Maybe if he can talk to Misaki about Usagi-san's teddy bear collection, algae ball collection and all the other odd things Usagi-san thinks are perfectly normal, it might take some of the shine off his first love. [Let's face it, Usagi-san's reality isn't for everyone.]
There are a couple grammar/spelling errors that I spotted:
"...death grip. Misaki he tried to shake them off"
"blabber" instead of 'bladder'.
and one "her" instead of 'he' that I can't remember where it was.
Sorry, I'm a total nitpicker ORZyhibikiMarch 14 2009, 17:36:54 UTC
Oooh, glad to see that Hiroki isn't being a total jerk. :) I'm interested to see where this is going.
"Hiro-san, if you're worried that because he's here we won't be able to have s-"
"Shut up! It's not what I'm worried about! I just don't like strangers in my house."
I liked that exchange. XD Oh Nowaki and his one-track mind.
One question though... why does it say that Misaki never took a course with Kamijou? In act 3, Sumi says that he "considered calling [Misaki's] name during attendance, but the professor for literature class is Kamijou, so [he] decided against it."
I guess it's more clearly spelled out in one of the doujinshi, where Misaki takes a hit to the forehead from Hiroki's blackboard eraser. XD The drama CD included with the Minimum manga also makes mention of Misaki being in Kamijou's class... I think it was just the one class though.
Re: Sorry, I'm a total nitpicker ORZfletsetMarch 14 2009, 17:50:35 UTC
Oh, nitpicking is fine. See, those are actually really big mistakes I fail to notice (I really had no idea about Nokia).
Regarding the thing with Kamijou: I did not read the entire manga, but in the Anime Misaki says that "there's a professor in his uni the throws chalks at people". I figured it doesn't necessarily mean that he takes his course... He might remember the name later in the story, but... (Besides, why would an Economics student take a Literature course on his first year? The schedule's supposed to be horrible, and freshmen usually don't have much choice in courses :P)
Re: Sorry, I'm a total nitpicker ORZyhibikiMarch 14 2009, 19:15:04 UTC
No, I completely agree that it's absolutely pointless for Misaki to be in the class, but it's canon that he was. XD If it had been only in the doujinshi, you'd probably be able to disregard it, but it's mentioned in the manga as well, so...
I think it's completely plausible for Hiroki to have forgotten Misaki, given how he has a bajillion students and Misaki probably avoided him like the plague outside of class. But "THE DEVIL KAMIJOU" seems to leave an impression on the students.
Re: Sorry, I'm a total nitpicker ORZfletsetMarch 14 2009, 19:33:27 UTC
Yeah, I know. I wanted him to remember the name sometime later, but now that I read the act you talked about... it is a bit of a problem. Myabe I really should revise it a little bit...
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Maybe if he can talk to Misaki about Usagi-san's teddy bear collection, algae ball collection and all the other odd things Usagi-san thinks are perfectly normal, it might take some of the shine off his first love. [Let's face it, Usagi-san's reality isn't for everyone.]
There are a couple grammar/spelling errors that I spotted:
"...death grip. Misaki he tried to shake them off"
"blabber" instead of 'bladder'.
and one "her" instead of 'he' that I can't remember where it was.
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And thank you for the corrections, I cannot believe I mixed 'blabber' with 'bladder'!
I'll fix them right away! :)
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"Hiro-san, if you're worried that because he's here we won't be able to have s-"
"Shut up! It's not what I'm worried about! I just don't like strangers in my house."
I liked that exchange. XD Oh Nowaki and his one-track mind.
One question though... why does it say that Misaki never took a course with Kamijou? In act 3, Sumi says that he "considered calling [Misaki's] name during attendance, but the professor for literature class is Kamijou, so [he] decided against it."
I guess it's more clearly spelled out in one of the doujinshi, where Misaki takes a hit to the forehead from Hiroki's blackboard eraser. XD The drama CD included with the Minimum manga also makes mention of Misaki being in Kamijou's class... I think it was just the one class though.
And this is the nitpicker in me, but I think Misaki is more likely to have a Japanese brand of phone. Nokia wasn't doing very well in Japan, and they've since pulled out of the market ( ... )
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Regarding the thing with Kamijou: I did not read the entire manga, but in the Anime Misaki says that "there's a professor in his uni the throws chalks at people". I figured it doesn't necessarily mean that he takes his course...
He might remember the name later in the story, but...
(Besides, why would an Economics student take a Literature course on his first year? The schedule's supposed to be horrible, and freshmen usually don't have much choice in courses :P)
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I think it's completely plausible for Hiroki to have forgotten Misaki, given how he has a bajillion students and Misaki probably avoided him like the plague outside of class. But "THE DEVIL KAMIJOU" seems to leave an impression on the students.
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Myabe I really should revise it a little bit...
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Sorry for an occasional confusion between the 'then' and 'than'; I know the difference, but it's likely I missed some replacements in spell-check.
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