fic: twenty-two miles per hour (tezufuji)

[fleuraelis]

Title: twenty-two miles per hour
Characters/Pairings: TezuFuji - although there is appearance of an OC.
Rating: T.
Warnings: mentions of sex.
Length: ~4,200
Summary: Fuji is an expert in crash-landing, but there are things Tezuka has yet to do - to dance under the rain, for one; to fall, for another.

It was meant to be a drabble. Apparently when I mean

Comments

[tacuma811]

I love rain, tbh. Not everyday, but rain can be so soothing. Sometimes I want to laugh or cry out loud when I walk or cycle in the rain. Rain is something that can comfort you, but at the same time if can burn your skin. That is why I like it so much that you wrote this story

[fleuraelis]

Me too, usually. There's nothing like waking up to the pitter patter against the windows, makes it really hard to get out of bed. Also, when you go out in the rain and inhale and all you can smell is water... It's wonderful.

Thank you for reading!

[tacuma811]

When it rained after a long, dry period, then you can smell the water and the earth. That is the best of rain!

[bunnysquee]

ooo ... i loved this! i loved the dreamy feel of rainy days and how tezuka's feelings for fuji paralled his feelings for the rain and also the symbolism of the umbrella fuji gave him. tezuka may be slow but he evetually sorted it out.

thank you for writing and sharing.

[fleuraelis]

Thank you for reading! Tezuka is slow, isn't he xD xD well I suppose being with Fuji is a new idea to him.

Your icon is wholly appropriate, lol. I loved that scene in the anime.

[kuro_wolf]

First of all. I would like to apologise for the crude language I am about to use in my comment. Men-gomen-go~
This story was a mindfuck. Has a lot of underlying tones which I want to congratulate you for cos this is usually the dynamic when it comes to TeFu relationship. Both of them are so vague and yet they understand each other without using so many words and thats how they fit so well. In my opinion anyway, :)
I really like this story, it wasn't the usual straight forward depiction of TeFu which is refreshing.
And I too love the rain. How it reflects how you feel on a crappy day and how it washes away the grime on the days when you wanna feel cleansed of all the shit in your life. How it comforts you on do-nothing-days and how it isolates you on days you just wanna be alone.
So yes, this story was a mindfuck, but I like mindfucks. Makes you think. :)

[fleuraelis]

This story was a mindfuck. Best thing I've ever heard xD

TeFu relationship is built on vagueness, I guess. And subtlety, and basically a lot of things unsaid and still understood anyway, just as you said - one reason why I love them so much. IMO, they're not really people for wild passionate declarations of love - rather than fire or volcanoes they're more like falling snow, building up slowly on the ground. Although, I suppose they can be passionate - aaargh the possibilities are endless for this couple, which is just as well because it's the only thing I can write orz. It's clear I need to branch out more, eep.

I like the rain too, except the times I have to get from one end of the campus or another without a hoodie or an umbrella or even waterproof shoes and then it's just miserable. But even then the raindrops are actually refreshing. Generally, rain is beautiful.

Thank you for reading!

[shiko_sensei]

This is lovely and well written.

Thanks for sharing!

Mishiko Shinsei

[fleuraelis]

o////o eeep.

Thank you for reading!

[altanaria]

Congratulations!
You have created an awesome fic. I love it!
And plus is that it's a fic of one of my favorites pairs! I love Perfect Pair!

I really like the way you write, developing the story through a rich vocabulary... at times it's like you are writing poetry!
And also, I think that you have portraited the "real" Tezuka and Fuji... I can imagine them in the future like you write them in this fic.

I've enjoyed so much reading this fic. Thank you very much!!
I will read all your other fics!

Best regards!!

[fleuraelis]

Thank you!

P-poetry? And 'real' Tezuka and Fuji? o////o n-no, I don't think it's that level, ahaha. I still need to brush up a lot on my vocab, but hopefully I'll improve. Thank you for saying that, though.

Thanks again, and thanks for reading!