Some story.

[fleurd]

Okay it needs polishing n adding and stuff but it was supposed to be a short story for an english assessment and yeah I wrote it at 5am the day it was due in like 30 minutes lol. Anyway.

Comments

[ricky_wood]

It took a while for the chills to die down in my spine.
Kimi, that story was beautiful. I'm biased, of course, because I believe in war and honor, but even to an unbiased reader, it's amazing.

[fleurd]

Let's hope the examiners agree lolz.

[ricky_wood]

S'like. you won't be posting anymore. =(
<3

[soulysephiroth]

Orgasmic nice. I love the imagery in it. How you decribe the pain to make more of a sence of it. The emotion was good as well.. sweet