My First Fic

[fleurdeleo]

Here's my first fan-fic. Inspired by Victoria's Lyric-inspiration contest

Comments

[musesfool]

Theodon’s

An E. Theoden.

[musesfool]

Oh, also, you might want to put it behind an LJ cut.

[musesfool]

You do an LJ cut like this:

<*lj-cut text="Surrender"*> without the asterisks, and you do that so people who are not interested in the fic don't have to read it.

[celli]

oooh!

But on the ninth day, driving his horse headlong to nowhere, with every beat of his heart he heard the wind cry, “you will fail.”

That gave me shivers.

[fleurdeleo]

Thank you, Celli! What a thrilling bit of feedback. You always hope that people will react to the lines that created a strong response in you when you wrote it. I'm so glad that line came across well.

[rohandove]

You have really captured a sense of despair in him, very well written. I loved this line But on the ninth day, driving his horse headlong to nowhere, with every beat of his heart he heard the wind cry, “you will fail.”

Very good! Would love to see some more on this, especially his thoughts as he was leaving Faramir.

[fleurdeleo]

Thank you so much. I'm going to work on that.