Poem and review

Feb 09, 2010 22:43

First, I'll repost the poem that I posted the other week, and then deleted again a few days ago in one of my many random moments of doubt. I didn't think anyone would notice it was gone, but it seems curiositykate did so I'll post it and hopefully won't randomly delete it again this time.

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theimposter February 12 2010, 01:14:03 UTC
Just read that poem and I must say that I thought it was amazing! I love the way that you have mixed what appears to be a free form within a tight structure. I liked the bleak cynicism of it. Very bloody well done.

Yeah, Batman kicks arse. Though I agree that sewers in games are sodding annoying (like dockyards) I think that it was very fitting to have the Croc fight there. I mean, read any Batman comic. Where is he? He's a croc! I was far more annoyed with the final Joker battle. A bit anticlimactic, thought I.

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flibble_2000ad February 12 2010, 22:07:44 UTC
Yeah, it did make sense to have that section set in the sewers. It was just a bit disappointing how simple he was to defeat though, and I had to find something to criticise in the game. I also though the end was a bit ridiculous.

Thanks for the comments on the poem. I wasn't sure what people would make of it. I never expected a response like that. I'm glad you liked it!

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