[oneshot] Nulla

Apr 07, 2015 14:37

Title: Nulla
Author: flightlesswish
Pairing(s): Chanyeol-centric, Chanyeol / Baekhyun, mentions of Baekhyun / Taeyeon, Sehun / Lu Han
Genre: Tragedy, Angst
Rating: PG-13
Length: 3,500~ words
Warning(s): Chose not to use warning(s).
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the story. I write fiction not reality.

It was getting harder to breathe. )

g: angst, g: tragedy, f: exo, r: pg-13, p: hunhan, c: chanyeol-centric, p: baekyeol, l: oneshot, fanfic

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bubblewoo April 7 2015, 16:18:02 UTC
I don't usually comment when I'm on mobile because it's hard, but I felt compelled to do so because this was really good. I absolutely /adore/ your writing style, it's so poetic and beautiful, and you captured the emotions so well. And I love how you incorporated the counting into the fic. It was so good I felt my tiny heart clench huhuhu thank you for writing this, good job!

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flightlesswish April 8 2015, 02:27:31 UTC
oh wow hello there! I'm really glad you liked this! The counting part wasn't actually in my original plan tbh, neither was the swimming thing, so I'm glad you liked it! ;u;

thank you so much for giving this fic a chance, and for leaving such a kind comment. I really appreciate it, thank you so much! ^^

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rosemochi April 15 2015, 23:26:14 UTC
WOAH THIS IS AMAZING! :) I love you so much for writing this! <3

I especially loved this

I’m sorry… Baekhyun whispered, and Chanyeol thought he could hear a drop of tear. I really am, yeol. A pause. Don’t leave me?

Chanyeol froze for a moment before averting his gaze to the shorter man.

A pair of eyes full of tears were gazing straight back at him.

Please?

Chanyeol’s eyes, surprisingly, softened. Do you know how selfish that sounds?

I just… Baekhyun choked. Don’t want to lose you. You mean a lot to me.

My Baekyeol feels.. I just can't.. -cri-

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flightlesswish April 16 2015, 07:32:39 UTC
Hello! Thanks so much for giving this fic a chance! :)
I'm glad that you liked that scene! I personally think that that scene is very human hahaha, it's one of my favourite scenes to write as well :). Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it really means a lot to me :')

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owmichi September 7 2015, 15:57:11 UTC
SBFHEFBJSHFKSDNKADNAIDBSIFBSF

I CANT BELIEVE I HAVENT READ THE ANGST TRAGEDY WARNING AT THE TOP I THOUGHT THIS WAS FLUFF OR SMTH ALONG THAT LINE AND NOW IM A CRYING MESS BC THIS IS SO SAD AND IT HURTS BC CHANYEOL IS MY BIAS AND I KNOW I KNOW I THINK HE'S ALWAYS THE ONE CHASING BAEK AND I REALLY DO THINK BETWEEN CHANBAEK HE'S THE ONE WHO LOVES BAEKHYUN MOREAND GOD JUST THE THOUGHT OF BAEKHYUN NOT LOVING HIM BACK SCARES ME A LOOOOOT BUT ANYWAYS BAEKYEON IS REAL (or fake idek but o really do wish its all fake) AND I CAN IMAGINE CHANYEOL HURTING DEEP INSIDE HDHFSZMXJHDJDJSS

YOU REMINDED ME OF ALL THE PAIN IVE BEEN THROUGH WHEN BAEKYEON CAME OUT BUT DONT WORRY IT MADE ME EVEN LOVE U MOOOOREEEEE

YOU WROTE THIS IN A VERY BEAUTIFUL WAY I AM SO HAPPY YOU WROTE SOMETHING LIKE THISSSSSSSS AND I LOVE HOW U MADE ME CRYYYYYY PLS DO WRITE KORE CHNBAEK IN THE FUTURE

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flightlesswish September 9 2015, 07:49:15 UTC
OMG hello! Me too, I also personally think, if Baekyeol/Chanbaek is real, Chanyeol would be the one who chases and loves Baekhyun more ;w;.

I honestly didn't expect anyone would be reading this fic after so many months have passed since I first posted this fic, so your comment is a real pleasant surprise! Thank you so much for giving this fic a chance and for leaving such kind words! I will try to write more chanbaek in the future, please look forward to it! Have a nice day! ^^

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asianfries November 30 2015, 07:47:36 UTC
i havent read baekyeol fics in a long time but this one made me want to keep reading them again T.T thanks for writing! it made me so sad

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flightlesswish December 3 2015, 03:45:07 UTC
Hi! I'm glad that reading this made you want to read more baekyeol fics. Baekyeol is such an interesting and lovely ship and I'm sure there are loads of more amazing fics about them out there! Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, it really means a lot to me :)

Have a great day!

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shinjuuu_san March 24 2016, 23:23:31 UTC
Hiii, I'm not usually a fan of angsty fics if I'm not sure they will have a happy ending (i'm a wimp lol) and this has a TRAGEDY warning on top but, as I started reading, I fell in love with your writing and dammit, you broke my heart but it's so beautifully written that it was worth it.

T______T

I'm new to the fandom and this one's the first good Baekyeol I've read, so thank you, I loved it. :')
adgrfskdjghfsdjklgfhsd now I'm gonna go cry while I watch crack!vids or something.

Byeeeee.... omg, my heart

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flightlesswish April 6 2016, 11:50:47 UTC
Hello! I'm terribly sorry for the late reply hehe. Welcome to the fandom! ^^/

Aww I'm sorry I broke your heart! Baekyeol break my heart often too >_> lol idk but I've always thought baekyeol fit the angst/tragedy genre more than any of other exo pairings. Weird because they're supposedly the most cheerful members of the band! Hahaha.

I hope you found great crack!vids ;) thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment! I'm really glad you liked this. It's also nice to know that someone new in the fandom reads my fic! So thank you!

Have a great day!

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