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A Scotch for the Road - Part 17

Mar 05, 2011 13:37

TITLE: A Scotch for the Road - Part 17
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: Slavefic. NC-17. F/m.
WORD COUNT: 4,390 (this chapter)/ story so far (over 50K)
SUMMARY: A slave enduring a party encounters more than he bargained for.
NOTES: Thanks to aurila for her assistance.
FEEDBACK: Always welcome, even if it's just to say that you read it.

( Scotch - Part 17 )

slavefic, scotch, femdom, original fic

Comments 31

triptyx June 27 2011, 00:03:45 UTC

I am finally back! :D I am sure that my ~deep~ and ~insightful~ comments have been missed! ;) So I start with a ~serious~ subject: getting Brett into trouble so there is more groveling in the future! >:D See its totally not about kinks! ;)

My hopes have been that Ty spells trouble for Brett, but lately I have been having second thoughts, now I am fearing that the kind of trouble it could be, wont be the fun kind of trouble! Not making much sense you say? :D Well let me explain I want 'trouble' for Brett in the sense of him kissing Ty and NO I most assuredly dont mean like you said 'what if Jenna wants a show'!!! >;)

I want Brett to loose his temper with Charlie or what was his name...Jason? So Jenna HAS to correct him for his behavior even if she doesnt WANT to! >:D

I have given up hope that even if the puppy-killing-spree starts Ty kisses him, Jenna will never even slap him in anger ( ... )

flighty_dreams June 30 2011, 04:26:13 UTC

Deep and insightful, lol. Regardless they have been missed.

Lol, how is getting Brett into trouble so he can grovel NOT related to kinks? XD

What, so you want Ty to kiss Brett in a moment of uncontrollable passion? :P Whether such a thing happens (or for that matter whether Brett loses his temper with anyone) I really can't say. But they are fun scenarios to picture, aren't they? :-)

Lol, puppy killing again. Aha I see, you want a slip or minor infraction not necessarily something extreme like say, a knockdown drag out fight. (Somehow I find the latter hard to picture. :P)

I am quite happy I've forced you to acquire a conscience. >:D

Yep, not surprised at either you or Fran savoring the groveling slave. :-)

Mhm, some spirit of collaboration at work there, eh?

I'm glad both scenes worked for you in different ways. :D

dark_amphibian March 5 2012, 05:14:13 UTC

It's lovely, diving back into this. The dynamics of Jenna's family remind me of mine. Sadly no enormous wealth to go with it. But the performance art that passes for conversation, angles, strategies, and overall ruthlessness? Oh yeah.

Huh, I think that's why I worry so much for Brett. It's hard to see how Jenna will prevail, from my own extremely biased perspective. Hadn't realized that until now.

flighty_dreams March 6 2012, 04:12:05 UTC

Aww, too bad. At least enormous wealth could be a consolation prize! ;-) Well, I'm sorry Jenna's oh so lovely father reminds you of your family. :S At least I know there's some realism here!

That's an interesting observation to make. It really is so hard to overcome the obstacles family members put in front of us.