A Scotch for the Road - Part 18

Jan 07, 2012 15:12

TITLE: A Scotch for the Road - Part 18
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slavefic, scotch, original fic

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flighty_dreams January 8 2012, 20:25:36 UTC
Haha, thanks. Yeah, I know it had been far too long since the last update... Hope to be more regular in future.

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peony_black January 8 2012, 09:47:09 UTC
Proper update is great update!

Brett feels different - better, and with that come the "inappropriate feelings". I somehow don't think this domestic happiness can last. Brett may try to convince himself, but it's not enough.

*sighs* I so want a happy ending for them ...

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flighty_dreams January 8 2012, 20:46:53 UTC
Thanks, it feels good to post a proper update. :-)

Hmm, he does seem to be trying his best to ignore underlying issues here. Unfortunately a common enough occurrence in relationships--lack of communication!

Aww, I'm sure they would appreciate a happy ending too.

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triptyx January 8 2012, 21:43:56 UTC
He is staying in bed and lets a free man make coffee...he thinks about throwing a free man out of the apartment or spilling something on him... You know he was your well-behaved boy, my hopes were on him! He is BOUND to make some mistake and then he will be in trouble and then I will be somewhat mollified when he is groveling >:D >:D >:D!!! ;) :D

A new chapter of Scotch! YAY! Finally! :D And now I want MORE!!! Who is Jenna's friend who goes around HUGGING slaves? :D Is he going to get into trouble with his ongoing ~friendship~ with Ty? >:D >:D >:D ;) :D Stop editing and post more!!! :) :) :) Thanks for this! :)

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flighty_dreams January 16 2012, 06:43:06 UTC
Lol, you KNOW that every time I read this sentence: "Brett debated possible ways to persuade Hathaway to leave, but neither throwing him out bodily nor spilling something on him, among other options, fell within the boundaries of proper slave etiquette." I would think of your certain outrage and smile. >:D

He is still well-behaved, OUTWARDLY. He can't help having some jealousy-driven thoughts! I mean if it were let's say, Alex, in this situation, he would have actually DONE one of the options Brett thought of! :D

Lol. How dare Amber hug slaves instead of beating them into submission? Is that the proper conduct towards slaves? :P And you noticed that mention of Ty, hmm? No detail slips past you. :P

You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it.

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fran_fic January 19 2012, 07:21:01 UTC
Triptyx's frustrations with this... is almost as delightful ;-)

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flighty_dreams January 19 2012, 11:24:06 UTC
Lol, I know. And I think somehow Brett getting hugged was the most outrageous part for her! :P

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berthablue January 8 2012, 22:01:52 UTC
I don't trust Jason. *shifty eyes*

Brett is venturing into dangerous waters - inappropriate feelings indeed! Can't wait to see what happens with them!

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flighty_dreams January 16 2012, 06:27:06 UTC
Hehe, shifty eyes. Yeah, he knows they're inappropriate, yet he just can't help feeling them, can he?

Thanks for reading!

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lunasblues January 9 2012, 00:40:53 UTC
What's this? I give myself an Internet-free weekend, and see what I've missed! A wonderful new chapter of "Scotch." It feels like this doesn't push the plot along so much as set some ideas into play. I'm looking forward to more, including poor, sweet Brett's jealousy when he sees Jenna in the gorgeous garment she'll be wearing to the party with Charlie.

Thanks for coming back!

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flighty_dreams January 16 2012, 06:29:46 UTC
Aww, not to worry, Brett was patiently waiting for your attention. ;-) Yeah, I think you hit the nail on the head there, this is more of a setup chapter. Aww poor Brett, we do so enjoy watching him suffer jealousy! :D

You're welcome! Thanks for not giving up on me!

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