Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 8

Aug 29, 2012 20:31

TITLE: Spliced 5-8
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tommyglitter August 30 2012, 00:48:28 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDD *runs off to read*

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flighty_dreams August 30 2012, 00:51:41 UTC
Quick on the uptake I see! :-) Enjoy!

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violadg August 30 2012, 01:16:49 UTC
I'm so impressed with the gradual, subtle changes you've made in the way Matt sees Min/Alex.

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flighty_dreams August 30 2012, 05:10:56 UTC
Thanks, that's what I was shooting for. :-)

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violadg September 2 2012, 03:58:14 UTC
Yep, imo you're really getting it right. I generally won't read stuff with an institutionalized slavery theme because it takes such control on the author's part to convincingly describe the accompanying societal delusions and doublethink. Brava.

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tommyglitter August 30 2012, 01:21:57 UTC
Oh, man, those two have got to get it together! I'm actually feeling sorry for Matt right now!

Lovely update! Please, please, please update quicker than the last time! Gotta know what's gonna happen!!! I keep thinking his past is going to visit Min...

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flighty_dreams August 30 2012, 05:13:02 UTC
Lol, hey at least they're trying... and I do want to give Matt a hug. He is so befuddled.

I know, I've been terribly slow this year. I will try my best, because I do feel ashamed about my slowness. :( Especially when I know how it hurts to have to wait for that next chapter...

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tommyglitter August 30 2012, 11:20:38 UTC
*hugs you hard!* I don't mean to pressure you or anything, I'm just jonesing for more. It's your fault, ya know! :D

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chaoskir August 30 2012, 04:33:35 UTC
Uhhh! Poor Min but it must be a real hard thing for Matt too, to get to Min. Whoa! I just hope they will get together.
Thanks for the update.

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flighty_dreams August 30 2012, 05:13:58 UTC
Yep, difficult on both sides. That they really talked seems like a good thing though.

You're welcome!

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peony_black August 30 2012, 09:05:49 UTC
I'm with Alex on this one, 100%.
Matt needs to reach a decision, because he can't have both this life and Alex.

Thank you very much for the update!

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flighty_dreams September 6 2012, 21:09:29 UTC
Yeah it's a complicated situation all around! At least they were being honest... That feels like an accomplishment in itself.

You're welcome. Thanks for commenting!

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