gamble away your fright, Harry/Louis, Liam/Louis, R

Aug 16, 2012 00:56

gamble away your fright
7 162 words, R

♥♥♥ to junkshop_disco for beta-reading and especially Brit-picking, and to randominity for the concrit and encouragement. Title from Beirut - Nantes.

This is a sequel to we are wide away, but can stand on its own. University!AU.

(Ao3)

Louis is lonely. Harry helps.

“The flat is really empty without you,” Louis blurts out without meaning to. “I hadn’t quite realised how empty, because I’ve never been here alone for so long.” )

these boys will be the death of me, fic, r, one direction, liam/louis, too many fucking feelings, harry/louis

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mrsyt31 August 16 2012, 01:42:16 UTC
..Ouch....yeah. That's all I've got. <3

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flimsy August 16 2012, 11:03:38 UTC
Thanks!

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mowglimoonshado August 16 2012, 01:52:32 UTC
ahh I felt sad the whole time I read this. Right from the get go you established this melancholy wistful tone that just undid me. I so desperately want it to all work out some way

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flimsy August 16 2012, 11:04:12 UTC
Aw, thank you :) I hope I can fix them. Love triangles are tough.

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randominity August 16 2012, 01:58:19 UTC
Ughhhh god. Louis is so avoidant. I want to take him by the hand and show him where "communication" is in the dictionary! But this is descriptive and painful and lovely, Louis having all these feelings and he simply cannot deal and he's going to break Harry's heart a little, I just know it.

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flimsy August 16 2012, 11:04:49 UTC
He is! I'm surprised Harry hasn't snapped yet. He might soon tho D:

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anoncents August 16 2012, 02:33:14 UTC
Uh...a polyamory relationship is the answer. I hope.

Ahh, this is beautiful...the language, the emotions, just everything. Your tags are accurate. I only pray that Harry won't be left broken-hearted. Thank you, this is wonderful. :)

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flimsy August 16 2012, 11:05:28 UTC
I will definitely try and fix them in the last installment, so fingers crossed!

And thank you!! :)

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nature_aly August 16 2012, 02:42:05 UTC
Oh wow, oh all my epic Liam/Louis feelings do not know how to deal with a Harry who is both the catalyst for their relationship and possibly getting hurt by it. I can just imagine his poor little sad face too easily, just like I was imagining Liam's sad puppy face every time he and Louis talked on the phone.

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flimsy August 16 2012, 11:07:01 UTC
Yeah, Harry is definitely the one losing right now :/ Louis is just an idiot and somebody should finally tell him so :D

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