fic: Payphone, Chapter 2

[flipflop555]

   Rachel slowly walked up to a seemingly boring building. It was nothing more than a low-rise among a block of other similar buildings, all lined together. She was wearing a simple work suit: purple blouse, black skirt and jacket with high heels. She took a deep breath and pressed the buzzer at the door. “Ms. Rachel Berry to see,” she looked down

Comments

[leksi231]

God, I feel so bad for balancing reading this and talking with my friend over the phone. I think I even let out a moan when Rachel came at the end. Let's hope my friend didn't hear that.

This is extremely HOT! I seriously cannot wait for more.

[mm_burnttoast]

Oh my gosh.. I think my brain melted with all of this amazing, beyond fantastic smut. (ﾟ∀ﾟ)

Also, I like Mistress Lucy.

[bsfan]

Really really good, as always. There were a few typos that were distracting, but not too much. This is like the opposite of Money Sex Power, we can only hope for a happy ending in this one too. Looking forward to more.

[mjacton]

Hot!

You did a really great job with this. The only small detail that distracted me was that twice you referred to Rachel as a singer, which I guess is technically correct. But, in this 'verse, she's a manager, right?

[xxb_rich30xx]

Holy shit.... *is dead*
05/11/90 - 06/09/11