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alycewilson May 19 2020, 02:41:53 UTC
Whoa! Great ending!

I also have friends in the dream world who arent in the waking world. I've often wondered if they're real.

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dadi May 19 2020, 11:47:16 UTC
Absolutely fantastic! And I agree with the other commenters that there is a lot of potential for one or more novels in this!!!

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adoptedwriter May 19 2020, 14:39:48 UTC
This is cool! Yes, I agree with others here. Keep going with more chapters.

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millysdaughter May 19 2020, 16:24:02 UTC
Yes!

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roina_arwen May 19 2020, 22:28:52 UTC
Great premise, very cool!

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