Keychain

[flipx]

So this is how it feels
To be in possession
Of a lighter keychain

Peeling them off
One by one
Into the evening breeze

Unburdened
From all the things
I didn't say

Comments

[rarabean]

Um... so tell me, am I reading something too much into this?

[flipx]

I think you understand perfectly.

[rarabean]

Well, in that case... *HUGE HUGS*

And take care! Coffee and cake sometime soon.

Also, Facebook event, go looksies!

[flipx]

Ooh, free music - and the Whitlams and Alex Lloyd. *swoon*

However, I have prior engagements on the shores of the Northern Beaches that morning, a dance class in the evening, and a farewell houseparty that night. Energy willing, I'll endeavour to drop by for a mid-arvo interlude. :o)

[fragilexhearts]

So... I totally forgot to sms you back the other day, but I couldn't do the beach anyway coz I had work.

[flipx]

Some other day this summer then - but it'd better be good!

[fragilexhearts]

We definitely need time to hang out and catch up... so much has happened since we last saw each other... a lot that you already know about, but I still need to get my Flip Mojo/Homojo back.

[flipx]

How does one go about luring Nessa out of the Shire?

[sych]

that's really nice

[flipx]

Thesaurus.com recommends "bittersweet"; but thank you. :o)

[sych]

evidently i missed some of the meaning. i did like the poem though. hope you're all ok... it does sound like u've been unburdened, and that's kinda nice.

[sych]

in fact you used that exact word. i should have thought of a metaphor, but i didn't - i hope you'll overlook it :)

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[retorogrl]

hm.. i think maybe? no? maybe? okay..really? hmm..

[flipx]

Yup.

Perhaps a short vacation is in order - want in? :o)

[bad_jew]

Wow, deep.

[flipx]

That's what I'll have people believe.

[bad_jew]

Hey, man. If you can pull it off...

I'm just teasing, obviously. I have no idea anything that's going on with your life, so ...a poem about a keychain may indeed be very philosophical. I always got Cs on my poetry critiques in Creative Writing, anyway.

[flipx]

It had something to do with a Jewish boy; but you'll always be my favourite online Jew. :o)