ok this has been sitting on my screen for i don't even know how long now, lol... i wanna read it so badly but awww my heart can't take it after last chapter. i'm so pathetic! haha
Admittedly, I may have just teared up a bit there at the end, even though I knew it was coming. I just want to be like, 'No, Naomi, it wasn't like that! Emily loves you, she does!' even though it's completely ridiculous and of course Naomi must know, deep inside, how Emily really feels about her.
There was so many things that made me just like, burst with love and happiness here, I can't even begin to tell you. Just everything Emily does and says, every little look or touch or word she throws in Naomi's direction makes my heart feel like it's being squeezed. I know she's hurting about all of this, and of course Naomi's hurting too, but I just want Naomi to finally just man the fuck up and do something about it.
Which is just -- well, it's Naomi.
God, I love this story. And you. Can't believe it's so close to being over. ♥
Aw, babes. Yeah man, I've wanted to shake Naomi a little bit since the beginning. She's not very good at thinking about things rationally though is she? I'm looking forward to seeing what she's going to do in the next chapter.
I think Naomi feels like her heart's being squeezed, which is why she reacts so fucking intensely to everything.
Someone's gonna need to make a speech I reckon... But where?!
I feel quite drained after reading this (in a good way, of course), there was a lot of ups and downs and it's not even a quarter of what Naomi, Emily and Katie are likely feeling. I mean, Emily and Naomi are being utter wankers, really, and yet, they can't stop. And they want to do the 'right' thing, but in this situation what is the right thing, really? I'm thinking back to the prologue that you kicked this off with, and trying to work out if any of this gets fixed, and I'm coming to the sad conclusion that probably not. Certainly not 'sailing into the sunset' sort of fixed. What worries me, is how Emily and Naomi's relationship is meant to function if they do get together. Katie's not the sort of person to say, oh well she's not my girlfriend anymore Ems, knock yourself out. And so, even if they do get together there's a massive clusterfuck still to negotiate. Unless there's more secrets.
The key difference between Emily and Katie, for me, is this: It's not the same fear she sees in Emily's, the one that says, I'm screwed forever
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Yeah, see - that is the issue that I don't think anyone else has mentioned, the whole 'how the HELL do they expect to have a relationship' thing. It's going to be a nightmare, so what do they do?
And, yeah - I think you're right. Or, at least, that's the way Naomi sees it. Naomi sees a lot of what she wants to see so, like, writing her is sort of like writing with blinkers. Not everything Naomi says and thinks is what's right, so whatever she tells us might not exactly be the truth. So we'll have to see on this one...
LOL, bit of Big Bro, and also the fact that I saw that dude on Wednesday. He also had one that said Proper Job and I really wanted a I ♥ Bristol one but I thought that would have been a tad on the lame side.
And - ha - yes, thank you. I must have been having a Megan moment ;)
Thanks muchly love, always wicked to hear your thoughts ♥
LOL, when I saw that your subject heading was just no I must admit I panicked a little, expecting some sort of WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?! comment ;) But all appears to be well so yay!
I'm afraid the next chapter won't be here that quickly but it is about halfway there...
You never know, Naomi may well end up with Freddie. Why the hell not!? But I can't pair Panda with anyone, sorry, so I guess Emily's left wanting Naomi...
Thanks muchly man! Hopefully won't have to keep you waiting too long :)
Thanks mate. Well, quite - Naomi is just a massive fool throughout this! Tis sad indeed.
Thank, I'm glad you thought the JJ reveal was okay. Like in the show, Naomi had no idea that Emily would do something like that. And it's good to see Naoms on the receiving end of something for once, so she can understand how it feels to care for real.
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gonna sit on it for a bit before i read... gotta prepare myself:P
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Admittedly, I may have just teared up a bit there at the end, even though I knew it was coming. I just want to be like, 'No, Naomi, it wasn't like that! Emily loves you, she does!' even though it's completely ridiculous and of course Naomi must know, deep inside, how Emily really feels about her.
There was so many things that made me just like, burst with love and happiness here, I can't even begin to tell you. Just everything Emily does and says, every little look or touch or word she throws in Naomi's direction makes my heart feel like it's being squeezed. I know she's hurting about all of this, and of course Naomi's hurting too, but I just want Naomi to finally just man the fuck up and do something about it.
Which is just -- well, it's Naomi.
God, I love this story. And you. Can't believe it's so close to being over. ♥
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Aw, babes. Yeah man, I've wanted to shake Naomi a little bit since the beginning. She's not very good at thinking about things rationally though is she? I'm looking forward to seeing what she's going to do in the next chapter.
I think Naomi feels like her heart's being squeezed, which is why she reacts so fucking intensely to everything.
Someone's gonna need to make a speech I reckon... But where?!
This story loves you too. As do I ♥
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The key difference between Emily and Katie, for me, is this: It's not the same fear she sees in Emily's, the one that says, I'm screwed forever ( ... )
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And, yeah - I think you're right. Or, at least, that's the way Naomi sees it. Naomi sees a lot of what she wants to see so, like, writing her is sort of like writing with blinkers. Not everything Naomi says and thinks is what's right, so whatever she tells us might not exactly be the truth. So we'll have to see on this one...
LOL, bit of Big Bro, and also the fact that I saw that dude on Wednesday. He also had one that said Proper Job and I really wanted a I ♥ Bristol one but I thought that would have been a tad on the lame side.
And - ha - yes, thank you. I must have been having a Megan moment ;)
Thanks muchly love, always wicked to hear your thoughts ♥
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I'm afraid the next chapter won't be here that quickly but it is about halfway there...
You never know, Naomi may well end up with Freddie. Why the hell not!? But I can't pair Panda with anyone, sorry, so I guess Emily's left wanting Naomi...
Thanks muchly man! Hopefully won't have to keep you waiting too long :)
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Thank, I'm glad you thought the JJ reveal was okay. Like in the show, Naomi had no idea that Emily would do something like that. And it's good to see Naoms on the receiving end of something for once, so she can understand how it feels to care for real.
Glad you liked it, thanks mate. ♥
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