A rewrite, and improvement to an earlier peice of work.

[floatingcouch]

NOTE: I have a fiction class in school. I had to write a 500 word peice. I decided to use something I have already written instead of come up with new material. I made some very heavy edits. I think I turned alot of the goofyness from before into actual humor. THough it is shorter, I like this version a lot better.Teenagers, us when we were

Comments

[senoritaelisa]

I don't like reusing stuff for school.

[senoritaelisa]

then again, it's lehigh. (and I don't think they deserve your time of day)

[lewd_propriety]

Senoritaelisa is right! You are a worthless son of a bitch for recyling material.

Why cant you write new stuff? Going to too many parties? give me a fucking break.

Add me as a friend dweeb.