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elrhiarhodan April 17 2013, 18:29:50 UTC
I like this subversion! Gonna play, too. As soon as I can find the time.

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florastuart April 20 2013, 21:39:42 UTC
It's a lot of fun - and it's interesting to look at the patterns that emerge! :) I seem to write the same sort of last lines as first lines ...

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elrhiarhodan April 20 2013, 21:45:32 UTC
I need to do this - maybe when I have some time tomorrow.

I keep coming back to your LJ to admire the header. They are so very pretty, aren't they?

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florastuart April 20 2013, 21:56:04 UTC
You should! :)

And they are so pretty! And so young, and happy, and they have no idea what's coming ... *hugs them both*

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nieseryjna April 17 2013, 19:28:06 UTC
ooo that reads almost alike a fanfic itself.... hmm I think I'm gonna play too...

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florastuart April 20 2013, 21:44:52 UTC
Thank you! :) It is quite fun!

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neontiger55 April 18 2013, 08:42:36 UTC
Oooh, this version definitely works! I like how you end your stories in a similar way that you start them - short, sharp, and open ended.

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florastuart April 20 2013, 21:49:38 UTC
Thank you! :) Last lines are fun - half the time I have one in mind before I even start writing, and it gives me something to aim for.

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sallymn April 19 2013, 07:22:37 UTC
There's something oddly poetic about it...

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florastuart April 20 2013, 21:54:35 UTC
Thank you! :) It's interesting to look at them all together - I do seem to have a consistent style, for opening/closing lines ...

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