Dinner - 1/1

Sep 03, 2008 21:32


Dinner. (ot5)
240 words. jaejoongcentric. G

Jaejoong speaks his mind. Everyone listens and goes on with their merry way.

"I love you," Jaejoong says suddenly, putting his chopsticks down.

"What," they all say over their bowls, except for Changmin, who's clipping a piece of beef into his mouth but his eyes say it for him anyway.

"I love you," he repeats ( Read more... )

pairing: dbsk gen, centric: jaejoong, writing, fandom: dbsk

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darknessgryphon September 4 2008, 06:16:44 UTC
Oh this was very cute. The out of the blue "I love you" from Jae seems to me to be just.. very him. I loved your characterization.

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florentineeggs September 5 2008, 03:43:14 UTC
Thank you! It'd been bouncing around in my head for ages, and it the entire thing practically wrote itself. Jaejoong makes writing easy--

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florentineeggs September 5 2008, 03:44:43 UTC
OT5~ ♥ I can't seem to write anything except that nowadays;;

Thank youuu

Haha, I didn't think about it as carefully as you did. I'd typed "I love you," in Wordpad and Jaejoong's name just seemed like the most fitting thing to come next. Now that you've mentioned it though, it does seem quite true.

Thanks for the comment~

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lollyribena September 4 2008, 09:17:52 UTC
I love you.
Aww. Blunt Jaejoong is so adorable :)
A good one!

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florentineeggs September 5 2008, 03:45:12 UTC
Haha thanks (: love Jae's bluntless like crazy.

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coolplastic19 September 4 2008, 17:33:14 UTC
ah this was really cute ^^
and the handholding was adorable :)

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florentineeggs September 5 2008, 03:46:04 UTC
Thank you! I love writing things with "symbolic hands," if it can be called that. There will probably be more of the sort coming, with the hands and all.

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kittykitt129 September 5 2008, 00:10:48 UTC
That's so Jae.
I could picture any of them but Min doing that, actually. Su's just random enough, Chun's just emotional enough, Yunnie's just leadersshi enough, and Jae's Jae. He says most things and get away with it.
That's also very sweet. It makes me all fuzzy inside. Oh, the Dong Bang love gets me every time! *cries*
It's very good, if my tears did not explain.

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florentineeggs September 5 2008, 03:47:43 UTC
Oh, your tears were received with the greatest appreciation~ Heh, maybe I should try writing one for Changmin, just to see how IC I can keep it. Glad you had the fuzzy feelings, Jae's love extends to you too.

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