Sampling; their lives as they would lead them. - 1/1

[florentineeggs]

Sampling; their lives as they would lead them. (yunho/jaejoong)
1 487 words. R

When the boys get a night off and get to spend it anyway they choose. This is after Yoochun moves out and before Yunho loses his composure from overexposure to Jaejoong. Their attraction is a furious, languid, breathtaking one. If life were a road, then this would be a pit

Comments

[reinmagick]

Oh wow.. this is a beautiful take on the whole thing with Yoochun moving out. And umm yea, I'm a bit incoherent right now, but I shall present you with hearts because you surely deserve them. ♥♥♥♥

[florentineeggs]

Thank you! It breaks my heart that Yoochun moved away from DBSK, albeit to be with his mom, but I'm sure it hurt Jaejoong more.

[blinkable]

Yes pls get it starting chef~~
*laughs gleefully*
I promise I will be back with more resonable comment if there is even one after reading this smut :D

[florentineeggs]

Haha, thank you! I'll be waiting for the reasonable comment~ Most of the comments so far have just been stunned strings of words.

[blinkable]

I actually re-read and guess what I am listening to while reading this? Jumun~ I was putting myself in self-hazardous zone XD
I still cant find my part of brain that is functioning what with the aftermath of Jumun but this smut of yours really is so real you know? ;) The flow of the conversations going back forth with JaeHo is definitely something one can picture them in and it's very close to RL scene for two persons making love to be able to be so carefree on their actions and then some ♥
Was that Yunnie's can't help but to be jealous of the soulmate? XD
It just dawned to me that they didnt even fuck! Ok I did not say that *runs off*

[florentineeggs]

Oh, dangerous~ I've been playing it on repeat too, so you're not alone. :D
♥ Thank you~! I'm so pleased it came off that way, this is actually my first time writing smut;; As in, ever. So I'm glad that it came out realistic and still, hopefully, hot?

Oh yesssss, glad you caught that. ♥

HAHAHAA, there are more opportunities in the future for that. ;D

[florentineeggs]

Awww, thank you so muchh. ♥ The metaphor for painting the image of YunJae was very unexpected, but I'm flattered.

[lollyribena]

There's one part where you didn't have a full stop and the tension is building up so much and I was like, Dammit, where's the fullstop!??

LOL. But, I like this. I manage to regain my sanity at end of the fic thx god.

8D

[florentineeggs]

HAHAHAHA DEATH TO THE FULL STOP, it breaks all my thoughts up. 8( Plus, if it built up the tension, as you said, then the literary device did its job. ♥

Thank you! I'm sure your sanity is lying around somewhere with your composure, hope you found both~

[imie_schweetzel]

this is hot and smutty and deep at the same time. oh the love that is yunjae. even when they made love roughly, it is still much LOVE. or maybe im just biased towards them. uhhh dont care. i love dz, love dz very much. >__<

i like how u asserts platonic!jaechun in here. hihi~^^

<3333 thank u for sharing dz!

[florentineeggs]

Hot and smutty and deep is pretty much what YunJae is to me~ It's okay to be biased towards them, I can hardly find anyone who isn't lately.

Platonic!JaeChun is fun, and no problem! Thanks for reading~

What's dz?

[imie_schweetzel]

dz = this. im lazy like that. bwahaha. >.<"