Proposal. - 1/1

Nov 10, 2008 19:00

Proposal. (yunho/jaejoong)
1 331 words. light angst. PG

Yunho feels a very certain way about Jaejoong. (If everything were nothing at all, wouldn't that be so perfect? The answer, sadly, is yes.)

conditional tenses break his heart every time )

pairing: yunho/jaejoong, writing, fandom: dbsk

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hyungie November 11 2008, 04:45:53 UTC
i needed this. guh.

wai you so awesome? <3 <3 <3

it's not a kiss. because they're men and men don't kiss.
i reread this a few times cause i dont know. gives me a shock in a the middle of it. ahahahah! ♥

really now. your yunjae is full of awesome makes me wanna cry.

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florentineeggs November 11 2008, 07:30:12 UTC
jdlfkafjd thank youu ♥!

I love my shock factors :DD YunJae for the masses!

ohgoddd please don't cry :')) thank youuu so much ♥ ♥ All I ask is that you keep reading and commenting~

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kelseypaige November 11 2008, 05:23:32 UTC
;; my heart, oh how it burns.

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florentineeggs November 11 2008, 07:30:35 UTC
b-but I was trying to be fluffy ;___; proposalllll

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kahel_luna November 11 2008, 05:29:35 UTC
i like the lj cut text ♥ i love that they speak as if they really know these conditional tenses. they love but they don't forget that there are these "what ifs".

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florentineeggs November 11 2008, 07:31:47 UTC
I think when the "what ifs" aren't just something you create out of paranoia in your head, but very very real consequences that you can actually FORESEE, it breaks a lot of things inside.

They know but they wish they didn't? :'\ Thanks for commenting and reading, as always~ ♥

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graveyardgrin November 11 2008, 06:27:19 UTC
"that's a horrible look for you," jaejoong says, picking up the pillow on the ground and flinging it at yunho's face. "good thing you didn't get the cute image."
LOL JAE, I beg to differ. 8) yunho can do cute just as well as the minsu.

somehow I found the last part about marrying rather sad- or more like bittersweet? I'm sure they love each other either way. ♥ and its scary how I've been listening to "wonderful" nonstop o_o

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florentineeggs November 11 2008, 07:33:36 UTC
Ohgoddd Minsu! ♥ ♥ Jaejoong's just jealous :DD Yunho's cute blinds me sometimes all the time.

Bittersweet (: They doooo, it's just that you know. There's that monster of society looming in the corner.
OMG I LOVE THAT SONG LKDFJALSK BIG BANG'S NEW ALBUM IS SO SEXY, I love 'Oh Ah Oh' too~ ♥!

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graveyardgrin November 11 2008, 07:58:37 UTC
Jae has no need to be jealous, he's probably the most gorgeous thing in the world. ♥

LOVE CAN OVERCOME ALL OBSTACLES at least in theory. >_>; AND YES I LOVE THE NEW ALBUM. I like all the tracks, i can't choose D: 'meongcheonghan sarang' is really nice! and I was pleasantly surprised by the remixes/new versions of songs that they've released before. BB IS SO AWESOME

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florentineeggs November 11 2008, 08:18:08 UTC
His face drives me insane 8( why is it like. so PERFECT;;;

SAAAMEMEE LKADJFAL except I don't really like seungri's solo;;; I wish they would have released more songs instead of doing so many remixes though ;___; this album really didn't disappoint~ The haruharu one is so good lksdfjas actually wait, yeah you're right THEY'RE ALL REALLY GOD LAKDFJS

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chloe1910 November 11 2008, 08:16:58 UTC
T____________T

here I thought it's gonna be fluffy but the ending wasn't really so >//<

this is one of those occasion where I hope circumstances would be different for them where "one of the were a girl, if it were legal safe accepted normal what both of them wanted"...

this is really bittersweet bb...I need a plaster for my heart..

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florentineeggs November 11 2008, 08:21:52 UTC
ldkfjalsd I was tryinggggg 8( at least Jaejoong said yes :')

I know where I can find a band-aid! Have you seen the picture that's part of the Mirotic version C photoshoot? ((:

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chloe1910 November 11 2008, 08:25:22 UTC
I've seen it. but still, my heart aches badly...sob..I need a bigger bandaid..perhaps a really fluffy Yunjae/ Jaeho fic from you?

gosh girl, I love your writing...

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florentineeggs November 12 2008, 05:06:17 UTC
I'm really really really working on one, I swear;; It's just strangely difficult for me to write fluff ;___;

Oooh my goodness thank youuu ♥ ♥ ♥

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