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Warm - 1/1

Dec 16, 2008 04:50

Warm. (yunho/jaejoong)
1 266 words. PG
◦ originally posted here.

An unromantic first kiss that isn't too bad anyway.

( blooming yellow kisses like parasites, sticking to the white berries of your heart )

pairing: yunho/jaejoong, writing, fandom: dbsk, writing: prompted

Comments 5

chloe1910 April 29 2009, 12:03:01 UTC

haha...this is adorably sweet..

florentineeggs April 29 2009, 17:28:33 UTC

thank you (:

queenlucifer August 17 2010, 18:29:17 UTC

lol but honestly
it must have been disgusting
he just threw up...
the idea is romantic
n the story is well written

but he just threw up...

ghina93 February 5 2012, 10:14:51 UTC

sweet ♥

and disgusting but its yunjae so thats fine lol

alectorine December 11 2012, 06:38:18 UTC

sweet and slightly cracky. it's nice to have a change from the angst - not that i don't love the angst, because i am a sucker for angst

but this was funny and i think i died from secondhand embarrassment
but okay

lovely fic anyway!