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[flowerinhand]

Please tell me if this is a good wedding speech, Im the maid of honour for my cousins wedding this Saturday and I want to see if this is good, or just corny. Please Please comment!

Ps- Bulma is not her real name, her name is Kelly, its from Dragon Ball Z

Comments

[_ankhsenamun_]

Wow,
I think that it is awesome =)

[flowerinhand]

Thanks doll!

[handful_of_lies]

It doesn't sound corny in the slightest, it sounds from the heart.
It's refreshing from the usual speechs filled with bad jokes.
The fact that you call her 'Bulma' in the speech, rather than 'Kelly' shows a bond that you two have.
Have a good time at the wedding!

[x_ashleyann_x]

that is really an amazing speech, it's great, good job