psych_30 23: Vicarious

[fluffnfreckles]

((See companion piece here.))

It had started with a simple mistake. Perhaps it had not even been a mistake; he had been told many times that it was not, that it had, as many things in life were, been an accident.

But nevertheless, it had happened, and he found himself quite stuck.

Comments

[ambitious_woman]

It was like he had died and not come back this time.

Something about that line really struck me, ad it really nailed down the moment. It felt like witnessing one's own funeral, to the extreme. And then life as it moved on after.

Well done.

[sarahnotlaura]

*flails*

[fluffnfreckles]

Good!flail, bad!flail, Ten!flail...?

[sarahnotlaura]

Good!flail, sad!flail, oh!NOES!flail!

[notsomerrywidow]

I highly suspect you're both going to kill us with these. Such wonderful wonderful writing. Thank you.