Just one minor thing. If he cut his arms and throat he wouldn't be able to hang himself. He'd be bleeding too much tho bleeding out goes slowly but still there'd be no possible way he could hang himself and I feel all of that is just too much anyway. He could just either slit his wrist or his throat or even hang himself and that'd be enough.
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Other than that it seems okay to me.
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