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Tongue in Cheek

Sep 17, 2012 23:26

Title: Tongue in Cheek
Rating: PWP
Pairing: Eunhae
Rating: NC-17

Summary: Donghae needs his fix and Hyukjae's sudden strike of lyrical inspiration isn't going to stand in the way of his mouth's goals.

( “Couldn’t you wait an hour?” Hyukjae asks, trying to maintain some semblance of righteousness. It’s not working and Donghae knows it. )

pairing: eunhae, rating: nc-17, !fanfic

Comments 9

yukinokara June 27 2013, 02:28:00 UTC

That was really hot xD I love Donghae messing with Hyukjae on purpose, and how Hyukjae channelled his anger. The switching positions was fun, and Donghae's eagerness was very welcome. I like the consideration Hyukjae had; pulling out or pushing in when Donghae signals for it, and I like your descriptions.

You did a great job with this, and I really enjoyed reading it!

~Wishes of health and happiness,
雪のカラ