Comments | flusteredmess: it's suffocating you; Daehyun/Youngjae; NC-17

flusteredmess

it's suffocating you; Daehyun/Youngjae; NC-17

Apr 20, 2012 23:07

Title: it's suffocating you
Author: flusteredmess
Rating: NC-17
Warning/s: breathplay
Pairing/Focus: Daehyun/Youngjae
A/N: SO. I actually have nothing to say except that this is for both feixing and halcyondusk, the true creative minds behind this... thing. And yes title is taken from Warrior, specifically Daehyun's line so wow um. Walks away.

( Youngjae thinks that there's something morbidly fascinating with the way Daehyun's face is slowly turning into a bruised purple shade, and how the state of his helplessness completely contrasts with the want that is painfully evident in his eyes. )

fandom: b.a.p, rating: nc-17, !fic, pairing: daehyun/youngjae

Comments 34

taepoongs April 20 2012, 15:15:44 UTC

"you're insane. You're a fucking psycho."

my thoughts exactly e______e waeeeee

flusteredmess May 17 2012, 10:02:03 UTC

why are you even here tho

halcyondusk April 20 2012, 15:18:35 UTC

SCREAMS

AFGHSLFGKH

halcyondusk April 20 2012, 15:24:45 UTC

wow just uh let me curl up and die in a little hole because holy fuck YOUNGJAE FAILING THE SHIT OUT OF DIRTY TALKING (lol he would oh god) AND BREATHPLAY.

um.

Daehyun's hand goes even faster as his chest begins to heave, his cock slipping in and out of his fist as he presses his thumb against the slit, desperate to even out the lack of air with as much pleasure as he can draw it.

"F...fu- fu...ck," the older boy curses with much difficulty, a tear slipping down his cheek

DAEHYUN CRYING oh god the images here have my soul THESE FUCKING PSYCHOS sobs.

flusteredmess May 17 2012, 10:04:27 UTC

ikr youngjae totally looks like someone who'd fail so hard in bed lmfao ;;;;;

crying during sex is such a kink for me. like you don't even know omg *.,*

feixing April 20 2012, 15:26:27 UTC

:DDDDDDDDDDD

YOU ARE SO UNFAIR OMG BUT I LOVE YOU.
ALSO, /IT'S SUFFOCATING YOU/ YEAP YOU AND ME BOTH DAEHYUN.

"FUCKING PSYCHO."
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD YEAP THE BEST.

feixing April 20 2012, 15:28:12 UTC

"Choke me." Daehyun suddenly cuts through his thoughts, voice taking a demanding edge.

WHAT DO I DO WITH MY LIFE NOW OMG YSSA, DAEJAE breathplay
YOU ARE THE BEST.

♥

flusteredmess May 17 2012, 10:10:12 UTC

YOU CAN WRITE ME PORN TOO? OR JUST FIC IN GENERAL REALLY

i love you ty for not having a concussion while reading this ♥♥♥

flusteredmess May 17 2012, 10:08:14 UTC

I AM NOT UNFAIR OK um imagine this in bigass font because i sort of forgot the html code l m a o this is what being internetless for more than a week does to you #realtalk

sob i love the title tbh it fits so much u___u apologies to daehyun for butchering his line in this. thing. crawls off

rainbowxrae April 20 2012, 22:28:39 UTC

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oh gosh. kinkyyyy very kinkyyy.
sdfdgfynd
yes.

flusteredmess May 17 2012, 10:11:05 UTC

heh the kinkier the better right? ;;;; thanks for reading! ♥

goopeculiar April 20 2012, 23:22:51 UTC

oh god, I saw this fanart earlier and all I could think about after that was daehyun and breathplay and I really couldn't get the idea out of my head and then literally minutes later I found this and oh my god I love you, I love you so much. I've read it four times now. I regret nothing.

dubuluvshinee April 22 2012, 01:19:36 UTC

/flailing

flusteredmess May 17 2012, 10:16:02 UTC

LATEST REPLY EVER but omg best fanart e v e r *m* asfkljsa awwww thank you so much! i love you too ahahaha?? ♥

ps: not to be creepy or anything but is that you in your icon? and waaaaaa is that zelo's mask which is also in my icon?? LMFAO so cool ugu

pps: you don't have to answer that if it's like. totally creepy ok i understand ;;;;

goopeculiar May 17 2012, 19:01:06 UTC

I keep coming back to read this aaahhh T^T

ps. yesyes, that's me~~ n___n look~

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