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second chances; Jinki/Kibum; PG

Apr 30, 2011 00:40

Title: second chances
Author: flusteredmess
Rating: PG
Pairing/Focus: Jinki/Kibum
A/N: It's been a long time, but I hope you all like this. ♥

( Jinki blinks once, twice, thrice until Kibum's standing in front of him, hands on hips and a small smirk on his pretty lips. )

pairing: jinki/kibum, rating: pg, fandom: shinee, !fic

Comments 46

melalocket April 30 2011, 02:55:42 UTC

onkeyyyyy >w

flusteredmess May 1 2011, 11:40:00 UTC

Thanks for reading. :)

dubukaichan April 30 2011, 03:28:52 UTC

D'aawww. So cuuuuute. And fluffy. =)
But the whole time I was reading this, it gave off a feeling of angst, idek. Maybe because I was listening to 2AM's "You Wouldn't Answer My Calls" while reading. LOLOLOL. I felt a bit emotional. Especially at the part when Jinki was reminiscing his one-sided love for Kibum before. xD

flusteredmess May 1 2011, 11:47:17 UTC

It's fine, considering that this fic is part angst after all. :)

Thanks for reading!

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flusteredmess May 1 2011, 11:48:08 UTC

And thank you for reading and commenting! :)

alpha_grid April 30 2011, 04:58:51 UTC

Oh my. Thanks for writing such cute lovely story ♥
Here're my favourite lines:

"Did you ever miss me?"
"Of course I did."

It should've scared Kibum, but it didn't.

"I had a crush on you, you know... But I got over it."

It should've comforted Jinki, but it didn't.

flusteredmess May 1 2011, 11:48:57 UTC

It's no problem. :D

Those are one of my favorite lines too! Thanks for reading. :)

This is a useless comment childishgrin April 30 2011, 05:23:18 UTC

but d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw.

Re: This is a useless comment flusteredmess May 1 2011, 11:40:15 UTC

Haha thank you. :)