you to light my nights somehow - fic, 1189 words.

[flutterfingers]

Title:  you to light my nights somehow
Characters, Pairing: Jo/Kat
Rating: NC-17.
Word Count: 1189.
Summary: For a girl who looks like she should be in a Midwestern Sunday school singing hymns or baking cookies, she is a crazy-good girl-kisser.
Warnings: Pornlicious. Possible tense-fuckery. I need a perma-beta, damnit.
Notes: This would have been

Comments

[scorpiod1]

UNF. OMG, that's the perfect thing to wake up to. I love how the tables sorta of got turned on Kat. I love this :D

[flutterfingers]

Why thank you baby! I'm just going to bed now but I'm glad you woke up to me fic!

Exactly what I was going for on the turny-tables thing. <3 I hope to write more Jo/Kat soon!

[cantarina1]

OKAY, THAT THE JACKET IS CLEARLY DEAN'S RIGHT FROM THE START JUST MAKES THE WHOLE THING HOTTER

I really love the sensuality of this piece, even before the characters get to bed. There's so much focus on licking and tasting and the feel of things, like cool leather against the belly, even the warm barstool and the sweating glass.

Also, I adore the first-time-awkward, but how they just laugh their way through it. And the way Jo (and the jacket!) linger even after the women have parted ways again.

[flutterfingers]

THANK YOU BB. I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO THOUGHT THE IDEA OF JO WEARING IT THEN SEXING UP KAT WAS HAWT. \o/ OTP.

And your attention to my detail makes me so happy. People noticing things I never thought anyone would (except me on my millions of OCD re-reads) makes me pretty much blissful. So triple-decker-sundae thank you.

Bad sex that is still good makes me grin.

[cantarina1]

JO IN DEAN'S LEATHER JACKET = AWESOME TIMES A MILLION. Actually telling Dean what she got up to in it when he catches her out might actually buy her enough time to slip away.

<3

Sometimes, I even like reading bad sex that is just plain bad *g* But the kind of sex you're talking about is so true to real life that it's always lovely to find it represented in fiction.

[flutterfingers]

How awesome would it be? :D

*beats back the bunnies*