Four Years

[flwrchild]

Four Years

Four years. Damn.

Four years since brown eyes had turned away from blue and disappeared down that dusty stretch of road.

Four years of head down, follow the set path, try to forget what freedom and happiness taste like.

Son of a bitch, son of a bitch.

Two bodies making up for lost time. Pressed together in a dance meant only for them.

Comments

Beautiful...

[grieving_pln]

Nor can I stop reading yours. This is beautiful. Straight to the soul.

Re: Beautiful...

[flwrchild]

Thanks!

[lolitaray]

Utterly gorgeous. Thank you for posting this. :) More soon, I hope...

[flwrchild]

Thanks. As long as they keep talking, I'll keep writing.

You're No Ennis

[ohiomyown]

You're no Ennis Del Mar, thank heavens. You have words, beautiful, fluent words to recreate the scene, my favorite scene where the pieces of the puzzle were for a time, fitted back together. So fine, Judy

Re: You're No Ennis

[flwrchild]

Thank you. It's one of my favorite scenes too, for the very same reasons.

[victopet]

I don't usually read the drabbles, but I clicked on this one and am so glad I did. It is so poignant and manages to bring back, in such few short lines, all the longing and emotion that scene evoked in me the first time.

Thanks,
Vic

[flwrchild]

Vic, thanks for reading it. Drabbles is mostly what I do (free time being what it isn't). So I'm glad you clicked this time.

[boo_boo_cat]

That was wonderful & touching.

[flwrchild]

Thanks. I hope you guys know how much your feedback means to me.