A Pinch of Reality

[flwrchild]

Here is a little something fun for this month's Dream Challenge.

A Pinch of Reality

It was early fall in Colorado, and there was a soft breeze in the air.

The sun was just setting over the mountains. Jack and Ennis were leaning back in comfortable chairs on the porch of their ranch, watching the last trails of color fade away.

Jack took a swig of

Comments

Pinch

[greatmtn]

Flwrchild, now Jack is really convinced that his dream of the sweet life has come true. Ennis really delivers a good pinch anytime Jack needs it.

thanks

greatmtn

Re: Pinch

[flwrchild]

Thanks for reading. I just have to see them getting that life and being happy sometimes.

[lizbird]

Very nice. >#

[flwrchild]

Thanks. I sure appreciate your reading it.

[my_lil_darlin]

Oh! I loved that little look at their sweet life. Particularly with this line ***Ennis rolled his head lazily across the back of his chair to look at Jack. “Mm?”*** I could just SEE them there! Lovely work.

[flwrchild]

Oh thank you! I was hoping it would make for an easy visual. Somehow it's just how I saw it in my head.

Too cool

[chameau_1960]

Thanks for posting this Sweet Pea... yes you know who I am!

Re: Too cool

[flwrchild]

Thanks for reading it honey.
xoxo

[crow61348]

VERY NICELY DONE. THIS IS ONE 'REALITY' WE WOULD LIKE TO HAVE FOR THEM (OR OURSELVES TO TELL THE TRUTH!!).

[flwrchild]

Yep, a cozy night, a sunset, a beer, and the one you love sittin' next to you - a little slice of Heaven.