Dream challenge drabble: That Kinda Dream

[flwrchild]

That Kinda Dream

“Daddy, you ever dream you can fly?”

“Huh?”

Junior’s question surprised Ennis and he looked across the trailer at her curiously.

She smiled back at him and explained, “I had a dream last night where I was flyin’. I get ‘em sometimes. What d’you s’pose they mean?”

He shrugged and mused, “Hmm, guess it prob’ly means ya wanna do somethin

Comments

[fizzerbass]

Oh, this is so very good! I loved how you worked the 'I did once' in there; nice how you switched it from Jack to Ennis. Gave me shivers!

Thanks for sharing it - glad you made the deadline!

Fizzer

[flwrchild]

Thank you. :-)

It popped into my head at the last minute. I'm glad I got it in.

I love that you got shivers!

[valleyview]

Very nice, flowerchild: Thank you.

Jeff

[flwrchild]

Thanks for reading, Jeff.

[lizbird]

Really Good!

His mind flashed on two figures leaping from a cliff into freedom, campfires flickering on moonlit nights, warm bodies tangled together, and blue eyes that could see straight through to his soul.

Sigh!

[bbmjack324]

His mind flashed on two figures leaping from a cliff into freedom, campfires flickering on moonlit nights, warm bodies tangled together, and blue eyes that could see straight through to his soul.

With a deep breath and a sigh, he smiled at her sadly and answered, “Yeah honey. I did once.”

Oh yes, they did fly *sigh*

[maggie1971]

Poor Ennis he had dreams, just couldn't play them out. nice job!