Mayonnaise Never Looked So Good [1shot]

Apr 07, 2010 14:20

Title: Mayonnaise Never Looked So Good ( Read more... )

*fanfic, hsj: yaotome hikaru, otp: hikato, hsj: okamoto keito

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x_vickiiiie April 7 2010, 21:37:52 UTC
I was eating a sub sandwich with lots of mayo as I read this.
.. I don't know whether to finish the rest of my sub or to put it to the side in disgust.
Ohh, i cannot look at subs the same way again >_______>

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flyhifrannypiee April 7 2010, 21:52:52 UTC
LOLOL! So my fic no good huh...? ;A;

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x_vickiiiie April 7 2010, 22:57:14 UTC
no, its too good.
it put me off eating the rest of my sub.
which means i can diet properly x) x)

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ryuuseicomplex April 7 2010, 22:42:49 UTC

But for some odd reason, Hikaru felt substantially inferior. He looked at his thin flimsy sandwich, looked at Keito's massive, solid, suitcase of a sandwich, and died a little inside. But what was there to feel ashamed about? Keito's titanic, meaty, thick, rock hard sandwhich? It's just a goddamn sandwich!

that whole thing just killed me xD *dies laughing forever*

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flyhifrannypiee April 8 2010, 01:06:25 UTC
LOLOLOL i'm glad you got it. xD

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candyapplegirls April 8 2010, 00:25:21 UTC
I'll never look at mayonnaise the same way again. And I used to love mayonnaise. ;______;

But it's good. *thumbs up*

Yeay! Congrats on still being awesome at writing smut. :3

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flyhifrannypiee April 8 2010, 01:07:05 UTC
lol i still love mayonnaise too... but in an awkward sorta way xD

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yamapiislove April 8 2010, 10:14:17 UTC
Hikato smut! Just what I was looking for!
Okay, now, to do the flailing.

JDHFJHDJSHFSSFGHFGH I LOVE YOU FOR THIS JFDHJFHVBCJVHFV even though I won't look at a sub the same way anymore, I don't really care JHFDHFSG

This was hot and funny ♥

However, not five minutes into practice, all of JUMP was topless, exposing their sweaty, glistening abs, and in Ryutaro's case, a pudgy little belly.
KJFJFJ OMFG KJFJGJ /DIES I WANTS *_________*

Each line perfectly defined Keito's amazing six-pack. His biceps bulged beautifully like cherry blossom buds about to burst into beauty. Everyone ooh-ed and ahh-ed like a horde of zombies.
Dammmmmmmmmmn. KJDFHJDFHJHG

"Dude! You could kill someone with those!" Inoo exclaimed.
Oh yes baby. They kill me everyday ♥

Lmao at Takanoo fighting and Yamajima trying to calm them down XD

I LOVE THIS ♥

Sorry for all the keyboard smash XD

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flyhifrannypiee April 8 2010, 23:37:16 UTC
LOLLL that was so enjoyable to read. ^^ you make me feel spesho. xD arigatouu!

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keisuke_chan182 April 8 2010, 18:32:05 UTC
man HOWT 1! XD

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flyhifrannypiee April 8 2010, 23:37:35 UTC
I KNO RITE? xD

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